Behind clouds - missed sunrises

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Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby aim54x on Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:44 pm

I thought I should put something up. Here are some images taken with the Sony A65V and the Olympus EP3 at McMahon's Pool on a wet and cloudy day where I actually woke up in a vain attempt for sunrise.

Note to Gerry - keep me well clear of your attempts, I think I am BYO-ing too much cloud lately

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Re: Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby Matt. K on Thu Apr 17, 2014 5:43 pm

The last image works best for me. It has a powerful, dream like quality which is helped by the amazing colours.
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Re: Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby zafra52 on Thu Apr 17, 2014 7:05 pm

I agree with Matt. I think the last image has more colour and works better than the other two.
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Re: Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby CraigVTR on Fri Apr 18, 2014 10:30 am

I think the last image is good, but I really like the tones of the B&W.
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Re: Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby ozimax on Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:04 am

All three are good but yes, the last is excellent.

So it's Gerry to blame for clouds and rain?
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Re: Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby biggerry on Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:29 pm

aim54x wrote:Note to Gerry - keep me well clear of your attempts, I think I am BYO-ing too much cloud lately


haha, cloud is good, just not too much! :)

I like the LE here, the last is quite good and clever use of the pool light too :) This is great location, did you go up past the pool to the cauldron?

ozimax wrote:So it's Gerry to blame for clouds and rain?

i get blamed for everything...war, famine..you name it :(
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Re: Behind clouds - missed sunrises

Postby aim54x on Wed Apr 30, 2014 10:36 am

biggerry wrote:
aim54x wrote:Note to Gerry - keep me well clear of your attempts, I think I am BYO-ing too much cloud lately


haha, cloud is good, just not too much! :)

I like the LE here, the last is quite good and clever use of the pool light too :) This is great location, did you go up past the pool to the cauldron?


Not this time, tide was coming in so we were all at the top of the steps trying to stay dry
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