Some Bird shots

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Some Bird shots

Postby sheepie on Tue Dec 28, 2004 12:58 pm

Taken with the 70-300mm G lens, 1 & 2 with the aid of the SB800. Cropped a bit in PS...

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Postby birddog114 on Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:05 pm

Wow! bird hunter! very nics pics!
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Postby sheepie on Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:07 pm

Thanks! Now - if only I had a...... [add extreme lense description of choice here]
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Postby Greg B on Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:12 pm

Good stuff sheepie. The first guy looks like he is a Canon bird, marvelling at your fine equipment :lol:

Nice colours on #2 also.

Yep, despite the obvious fact that your 70-300 is giving you fabulous results, you definitely need some outrageously expensive additional lens immediately. No worries. And a new bag to carry it. And a filter. :)
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Postby BBJ on Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:38 pm

Good shots sheepie, you said you used the flash on the first 2, how far away was you when you took these shots, and if you was a fair way does the flash really make a differance over that distance?
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Postby Vicareyus on Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:18 pm

Good shots. Love colours in #2 also, and am also keen to hear your answer re flash (I'm also a flash novice). I think you should buy yourself a 70-200VR!!!
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Postby sheepie on Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:33 pm

BBJ wrote:...you said you used the flash on the first 2, how far away was you when you took these shots, and if you was a fair way does the flash really make a differance over that distance?


In both, I reckon I was maybe five or six metres away at most, so the flash certainly made a difference. I think that it has helped render the colours a bit better, with higher contrast than I would have got in the available light. In the second one, you can see the reflection of the flash light on the wires. I think with a bit more experience, the first one would have helped the bird stand out from the background a little better - not quite there at the moment, but close :)

Thanks for the feedback all :)
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Postby Killakoala on Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:41 pm

Fantastic pics Sheepie. Such vivid colours.

Did these birds visit your garden or did you have to visit them? :)
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Postby meicw on Tue Dec 28, 2004 7:06 pm

Sheepie, Great pics!!. I am thinking of getting a 70-300 lens. With results like these, I am leaning toward the Nikon G

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Postby sheepie on Tue Dec 28, 2004 7:10 pm

Killakoala wrote:Did these birds visit your garden or did you have to visit them? :)


They were around the neighbourhood up at Old Bar (just out of Taree) - we spent Christmas there with the In-Laws. The Black Cockatoos have been terrorising the local trees for a couple of weeks now, while the kookaburra and others just hang around hoping to find some food!

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Postby christiand on Tue Dec 28, 2004 7:14 pm

nice shots.
I envy you for the black Cockatoo.

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Postby mudder on Tue Dec 28, 2004 7:25 pm

G'day,
Sheepie, #1 is a cracker! He's watching you take the shot... Nice with a bit of foliage and flowers etc. in the shot to make it very natural...

Geees, it's hard typing after a few reds... It's taken me three goes to upt in the dots! Damn, I'll give up now....

Jealous of the Black Cocky, they're not common so thanks for that one!

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Postby nodabs on Tue Dec 28, 2004 8:25 pm

i love number two colour and composition are dead on :D nice work
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Dec 28, 2004 8:35 pm

Sheepie
The kookaburra is almost similar to one I took 20 years ago on good old Tri-x and have sepia-toned and framed on the wall. It's one of my favourite prints. Spooky!

Your other birds are great, but look a little contrasty on my monitor. Are you slightly over-popping them in post processing? Do other forum members see them as slightly contrasty?
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