Ship in the night

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Ship in the night

Postby ozimax on Thu Jul 03, 2014 8:54 pm

The missus and I got to spend a couple of days in Tas-cold-mania, arriving back into Sydney this afternoon. Last night we were enjoying dinner at a restaurant in Devonport when the Spirit of Tasmania's horn blew. I left my chocolate and pecan pie, raced across the road, camera in hand, and in the pitch black captured the grand old ship leaving the harbour.

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ImageShip2 by Ozimax, on Flickr

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Re: Ship in the night

Postby Matt. K on Thu Jul 03, 2014 10:50 pm

Amazing quality for grab shots. Fuji? I like the last shot best but haven't yet worked out why.
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby ozimax on Thu Jul 03, 2014 11:08 pm

Matt. K wrote:Amazing quality for grab shots. Fuji? I like the last shot best but haven't yet worked out why.


Fuji indeed. I could have tried iso 25,600 but I stopped at 12,800. The ship was moving fast.
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby PiroStitch on Fri Jul 04, 2014 1:03 am

I like the last one best with the composition. There's a tension in the shot because I'd usually expect the ship to be on the right, if it's sailing into the open sea. The way it's been composed though, it feels quite ominous as it's not about to sail into open space and waters. Reminds me a bit of the Titanic..
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby TonyT on Fri Jul 04, 2014 5:23 am

PiroStitch wrote:I like the last one best with the composition. There's a tension in the shot because I'd usually expect the ship to be on the right, if it's sailing into the open sea. The way it's been composed though, it feels quite ominous as it's not about to sail into open space and waters. Reminds me a bit of the Titanic..

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Re: Ship in the night

Postby ozimax on Fri Jul 04, 2014 8:16 am

PiroStitch wrote:I like the last one best with the composition. There's a tension in the shot because I'd usually expect the ship to be on the right, if it's sailing into the open sea. The way it's been composed though, it feels quite ominous as it's not about to sail into open space and waters. Reminds me a bit of the Titanic..


Thanks Piro. I'd never quite thought of it that way. Tension yes, but the composition comment is interesting. To be honest, the thing moves so quickly you have very little time to even think about composition. It's just getting things in focus in the pitch black night. However, upon reflection, the scene does give a sense of foreboding. Thankfully and to all accounts, it made it's way to Melbourne and all was well. :lol:
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby sirhc55 on Fri Jul 04, 2014 11:18 am

I agree on the last shot. It has more impact than the others and the black space to the right lends itself to advertising copy.
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby zafra52 on Sat Jul 05, 2014 3:28 pm

The subject is placed on the two thirds of the frame and the reflected light behind gives the impression the ships is moving away from the viewer in a dark night, that's why it works better that the other two. It is a great picture despite so much black.
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby CraigVTR on Tue Jul 08, 2014 8:37 am

I agree about the last shot. I think what works is that the balance of the reflection and the smoke trailing off into the dark tells me the ship is not going somewhere but it is 'leaving' somewhere.
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby big pix on Wed Jul 16, 2014 9:09 am

......good images from the Fuji
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Re: Ship in the night

Postby ozimax on Wed Jul 16, 2014 9:14 am

big pix wrote:......good images from the Fuji


Thanks Bernie. I am in the Lake Macquarie region for the next few weeks. Might be time to take a few photos...
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