Sydney's Macquarie Lighthouse revisited

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Sydney's Macquarie Lighthouse revisited

Postby firsty on Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:48 pm

I went back to the lighthouse in This thread to try for a better shot, I was looking for a cleaner image with good clouds in the sky
so I headed over late Saturday afternoon to get better light than what was available when I took the first shot at midday last week

When I arrived I was greeted by a clear blue sky without any clouds :(
10 minutes later luck was with me and the clouds started to form and after a further 10 minutes this is the result, 5 minutes later the clouds had merged into a flat boring lifeless blanket (it is all about timing)

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Postby adame on Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:58 pm

Love it, although i cant help but look at the fence on the lower right hand side maybe a crop
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Postby MHD on Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:19 pm

That is surreal... Looks kind of like a 3d render...
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Postby casnell on Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:27 pm

I love it, POTW for me !

I'd like to see the colour version for interests sake....
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Postby rflower on Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:34 pm

I like this photo a lot. It is a lot clearer and sharper ( in my opinion) than your previous shot of the same scene. The clouds above it are awesome, and I think the composition is great.

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Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:08 pm

Cracker shot Keith. That's a great example of the value in revisiting a place to get the perfect image.
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Postby owen on Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:24 pm

I like it a lot. I find the lower right hand slightly distracting, however the photo is great and would look even better in larger format.
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Postby mic on Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:29 pm

I still prefer the 1st Firsty, but thats just me.

It had a darker feel to it and more eeriness about it.

This is good though.

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Postby Pa on Sun Nov 12, 2006 9:59 pm

a picture is better then a thousand words,this image says it all.well done keith
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:27 pm

Very dramatic shot Keith! I'm guessing there was a fair bit of PP involved in this too? This would make a fine large print.
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Postby Yi-P on Sun Nov 12, 2006 10:52 pm

Wow, the sky, clouds and ground + subject is all near perfect (if it is not yet perfect)... :)
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Postby radar on Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:23 pm

Great shot Keith,

love it. Did you PP the light in the lighthouse?

Great photo, as others said, it would look great printed big.

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Postby surenj on Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:17 pm

Great scary feel to the pic but for me the sky overpowers the lighthouse somewhat.

Maybe you could make the sky a little less sharp to focus attention on the lighthouse?
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Postby Stargazer on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:19 am

The cloud field has a real defined edge to it and, to me, it make the lighthouse look as if it's a model sitting in a box and you've taken the shot with the camera sitting in the box looking out ... does that make sense? :cough:

The whole scene looks a little dark to me for my taste - but a great shot non the less. :up:
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Postby Glen on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:26 am

Fantastic Keith
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Postby gooseberry on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:46 am

Nice one Keith, like the cloud formation, though I would have preferred it if they weren't so dark as to blend a little with the sky - perhaps a lighter treatment of the clouds would work better.

Also agree with adame about getting rid of the lower right fence area.
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Postby big pix on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:50 am

....... a of mood in ths capture....... good capture
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Postby big pix on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:51 am

....... a lot of mood in ths capture....... very good
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Postby macka on Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:09 pm

Congrats on your ribbon on DP Challenge!!

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Postby Frankenstein on Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:09 pm

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Postby radar on Mon Nov 20, 2006 7:52 pm

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Postby obzelite on Mon Nov 20, 2006 8:50 pm

very nice. got to love when mother nature helps you out.
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:20 pm

Terrific image Keith. Plenty of mood relayed. Lovely smooth tones.
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