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Postby NJ on Sat May 05, 2007 3:20 pm

i have been wanting to take this photo for a couple of weeks now, finally got the chance with no cars in the way. taken with the 50mm 1.8... 1/15sec @ f/5.6. what do you think?

selective colour:
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desaturated:
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EDIT: added desturated version due to macka's input :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat May 05, 2007 3:28 pm

I really like this Nathan, it works well, very well. The selective colour I felt was subtle and very affective, the composition is well thought out and frames the shot very well. Also the choice of shutter speed to get the movement in the walker, all bring things together nicely. Well done.
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Postby NJ on Sat May 05, 2007 3:31 pm

thanks craig! yeah i actually took the time to think it through. I walk down this alley way after uni every day to go to the station. So i was constantly thinking about ways to make a photo out of it.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat May 05, 2007 3:37 pm

NJ wrote:thanks craig! yeah i actually took the time to think it through. I walk down this alley way after uni every day to go to the station. So i was constantly thinking about ways to make a photo out of it.


Well it's definitely shows, you're photography keeps improving, so keep thinking and shooting.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat May 05, 2007 3:45 pm

Pro’s

Great composition
Excellent colour balance
Well worth the wait

Con’s

None
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Postby macka on Sat May 05, 2007 3:50 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Pro’s

...

Con’s

None


Is this your new thing, Chris? I like it. :D

Edit: should probably remember to comment on the image while I'm here (D'oh).

Compositionally I really like it. Not sold on the selective colour, though - I don't know, I could be wring but I just don't think it needs it. I think I would go with a desaturated look instead if it were my shot.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat May 05, 2007 4:12 pm

Precludes using a superfluous amount of verbiage Kris :wink: :wink:
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Postby Alex on Sat May 05, 2007 4:13 pm

Great photo, Nathan. Beautifully composed with framing provided!

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Postby NJ on Sat May 05, 2007 5:42 pm

thanks very much everyone

macka, i took in your advice, and it looks great, i added it to the original. thanks :D
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Postby Killakoala on Sat May 05, 2007 6:58 pm

I like both takes of the image. I do love a good example of contrast.
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Postby BT*ist on Sat May 05, 2007 7:53 pm

Excellent shot - I think the selective desaturation works: it becomes a frame for the central image. The original isn't bad either, but my eyes weren't really sure where to focus. How long were you lying in wait to take it?
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Postby stubbsy on Sat May 05, 2007 8:50 pm

Nathan

I've said it before, but I'll say it again - boy you're getting good. I prefer the desat (#2) to the selective colour.
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Postby NJ on Sat May 05, 2007 9:32 pm

thanks guys :D! umm was a fair few weeks until i finally took my camera, then it was a matter of 5 minutes - waiting for someone to walk past (couldnt see them coming)
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Postby rooboy on Sun May 06, 2007 12:28 am

Fantastic shot, & love the processing in the second :D
So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
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Postby macka on Sun May 06, 2007 10:21 am

Hey Nathan - de-sat version looks great to me. Excellent shot. :)
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Postby Big V on Sun May 06, 2007 5:00 pm

I actually like the original shot because I find it forces me to view all of the scene, whilst the desat version focus me to the man too quickly. There is so much to see in this image, love the posters ang graffiti on the walls, which is what makes the whole scene so visually interesting. Good stuff.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun May 06, 2007 9:10 pm

I like the destat that has now been posted too! Well done!
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