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Dee Why beach

Postby Mrs Reschsmooth on Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:46 pm

Hi all

We went to Dee Why beach this afternoon, the light was beautiful.
Here are some I've had a play with....c&c appreciated.

Alicia

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Postby Geoff on Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:32 pm

Beautiful images Alicia!
I'm not normally a fan of frames on a digital image, but these work with your shots quite well. Great stuff.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:36 pm

Very nice Alicia I prefer version 3 out of the set, I like the balance in the seagulls.
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Postby colin_12 on Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:22 am

I like #2 Alicia.
It comes out well as a B&W.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:01 am

I too like number two. It has a very nice rustic feel to it.
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Postby Manta on Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:06 pm

I like them all Alicia but would go for No1 as my fave. The frames however... :?
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Postby Pehpsi on Sun Jun 03, 2007 1:53 pm

#3 for me, i like the subtle tones in the sky and foreground :)
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Postby Rick on Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:02 pm

#2 is my pick, looks like an old paining, sort of? nice work

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Postby Mrs Reschsmooth on Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:24 pm

Thanks for the feedback everyone. :)
About the frames....guess they're kind of postcard frames. Anyone have any ideas on how to do the rougher looking frames in CS2? I'd like to do the style that looks as though you have painted on the developer in the darkroom.
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:42 pm

Alicia
They all work for me. How important are the 2 birds in the compostion? They make it! Nice work!
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Postby mattyjacobs on Sun Jun 03, 2007 10:36 pm

wow, I miss living at Dee Why. Thanks for bringing up some nice memories.

#3 probably is my favourite. #'s 1 & 2 look like old historical shots that you see around the place.
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