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by wendellt on Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:27 pm
Just bored on a friday afternoon
what else is there to do but photograph the only female empolyee at work
all shot with the 28-70 f2.8 f4 ISO100 1/250 70mm
with a canon flash(on remote cord sc28) which sems to work on my nikon camera
re-crops near 100%
this one f2.8
i'm really liking eyes at the moment seems like i will be lusting over a 105 macro
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by Nnnnsic on Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:36 pm
Second one is the best.
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by losfp on Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:37 pm
I like #2, Wendell  The composition seems to work better for me than the other two - the eye is being shot more front-on, and is more of a central point of focus than #1 and #2. Looks like you have that flash somewhere over your left shoulder?
Wish I could attack my colleagues here in the office.. I have a brand new shiny Tokina 12-24 that I just received from the Birdy & Poon Delivery Service... but the D70s is at home! lol.
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by jben_net on Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:48 pm
great work.... nice and sharp... wish I could have time to shoot employees at work..... it's risky enough just posting here.... its all about deadlines, deadlines and deadlines.....
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by wendellt on Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:49 pm
thanks LEigh bud
number two in terms of comp is good
however I like the the colour in the 3rd, green eyes being rare
Des flash at 10 'o' clock mostly and quite close to her hence my high shutterspeed of 1/250
J-ben
Thanks man I do have deadlines but with st patricks day and the boss at the pub what the else is there to do?
here is the colour version with enhanced colour tweak on the skin
shadow tones cyan bias midtones red and yellow bias

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by Nnnnsic on Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:50 pm
And it works better in colour.
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by myarhidia on Fri Mar 17, 2006 1:00 pm
Personally I'd go for #3.
IMO, the others would better if you applied some selective blurring to the nose & cheek a bit. The lens is so sharp that you can see the fur which I find distracting from the subject being the eye.
Does the name Pavlov ring a bell?
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by mudder on Fri Mar 17, 2006 8:06 pm
Those eyes in the last one.... those eyes..... uhm.... where was I???
Agree about softening the skin, but those eyes... those eyes... I think I'm lost...
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by nito on Fri Mar 17, 2006 8:11 pm
Very engaging shots wendelt. 
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by Slider on Fri Mar 17, 2006 8:53 pm
Very nice Wendell. 2nd in colour is my fav. The eyes certainly do have it. 
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by beetleboy on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:05 pm
Love them Wendell. Although there are billions of photo's of eye's on the net it's always nice to see someone else's take on the subject (and I don't mean to take anything away from you by saying that).
I like the high key effect and the clarity of these - stunning.
These would work well to promote eye health cos these eyes look like they belong to a very healthy person!
Liam =]
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by Zeeke on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:10 pm
Beautifully coloured eyes, prefer them to the B&W versions.. damn nice
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by Alpha_7 on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:32 pm
Wendell you are lucky to have a willing subject at work, let her know she has beautiful eyes! Lovely composition and treatment!
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by rokkstar on Fri Mar 17, 2006 10:34 pm
Gorgeous Wendell!
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by Steffen on Fri Mar 17, 2006 11:28 pm
Nnnnsic wrote:And it works better in colour.
For me, too. Hmm, hazel, my favourite eye colour...
Wendell, did you manage to get her number?
Cheers
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by wendellt on Sat Mar 18, 2006 1:32 am
Steffen wrote:Nnnnsic wrote:And it works better in colour.
For me, too. Hmm, hazel, my favourite eye colour... Wendell, did you manage to get her number? Cheers Steffen.
stephen i don't need to i work with her everyday and she tags along to most of the social events i shoot
thanks everyone for the comments i really like taking pics of female eyes
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by Oneputt on Sat Mar 18, 2006 8:29 am
I have just come across this thread and for me the second image is a standout. Very powerful and mysterious at the same time.
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