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Who is after my bone...

Postby fozzie on Tue May 09, 2006 7:58 pm

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Both taken with the Nikkor 300mm f/4 + TC-14EII + SB-800

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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 09, 2006 8:09 pm

Wow! Upclose and personal! Are these full frame and where you handholding or monopod ?
If anything for me, these are a little too tight and close and I'd like to see the crop (composition) loosened a little.
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Postby xerubus on Tue May 09, 2006 8:11 pm

i really like these composition wise.. just one thing.. try adding some contrast... they really pop quite nicely with about +18 is ps.

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Postby fozzie on Tue May 09, 2006 8:23 pm

Alpha7 - slightly cropped and using a monopod.

I was experimenting in just getting the facial expression of the Lions. I was no more than 4.0 metres from the subject.

Alpha_7 wrote:Wow! Upclose and personal! Are these full frame and where you handholding or monopod ?
If anything for me, these are a little too tight and close and I'd like to see the crop (composition) loosened a little.
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Postby rooboy on Tue May 09, 2006 8:24 pm

#1 is fantastic, a great capture with the snarled expression and golden eyes.

Using the 300 + 1.4 TC, I'd imagine you were pretty far away from the subject, did the flash actually help at all? The only flash I have is pop-up so I'm pretty clueless here :oops:

Edit: Just read your new post, that answered my question nicely :)
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Postby suzanneg on Tue May 09, 2006 8:40 pm

Aww, I want to pat him. He looks cute and cuddly in the second shot. :D
I think I like the second shot better because there is a bit of background for the face to stand out against.
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Postby Mal on Tue May 09, 2006 8:45 pm

Love the closeness of these shots Fozzie. BTW is this fella from Monarto Zoo? Looks very familiar. And if so has he finally got his girls in the same enclosure with him.
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Postby fozzie on Tue May 09, 2006 9:11 pm

Mal - I do not know where he came from, although Monarto is a possibility. He is in the same cage as two females. All the Lions are in magnificant condition.

Mal wrote:Love the closeness of these shots Fozzie. BTW is this fella from Monarto Zoo? Looks very familiar. And if so has he finally got his girls in the same enclosure with him.
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Postby Mal on Tue May 09, 2006 9:19 pm

fozzie wrote:Mal - I do not know where he came from, although Monarto is a possibility. He is in the same cage as two females. All the Lions are in magnificant condition.

Mal wrote:Love the closeness of these shots Fozzie. BTW is this fella from Monarto Zoo? Looks very familiar. And if so has he finally got his girls in the same enclosure with him.


Sorry Fozzie should have been a little more specific. Did you take these shots at Monarto Zoo?
From your reply I assume that you didn't :) Was it Adelaide Zoo?
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Postby fozzie on Tue May 09, 2006 9:27 pm

That's alright Mal. Adelaide Zoo.

Mal wrote:
fozzie wrote:Mal - I do not know where he came from, although Monarto is a possibility. He is in the same cage as two females. All the Lions are in magnificant condition.

Mal wrote:Love the closeness of these shots Fozzie. BTW is this fella from Monarto Zoo? Looks very familiar. And if so has he finally got his girls in the same enclosure with him.


Sorry Fozzie should have been a little more specific. Did you take these shots at Monarto Zoo?
From your reply I assume that you didn't :) Was it Adelaide Zoo?
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Postby avkomp on Tue May 09, 2006 9:38 pm

agree with the suggestion of adding contrast.

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Postby Marvin on Tue May 09, 2006 10:30 pm

Fozzie - I really like these. I agree that they could do with a little more "pop" but I have no idea how to do it. Great facial expression! Well done! :D
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Postby Marvin on Tue May 09, 2006 10:32 pm

 PS and completely O/T

Mal, did you ever work on Bananas in Pyjamas?? My daughter got a video from the library with a puppeteer called Mal credited on the back. :lol:
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Postby Mal on Tue May 09, 2006 10:44 pm

Marvin wrote:PS and completely O/T

Mal, did you ever work on Bananas in Pyjamas?? My daughter got a video from the library with a puppeteer called Mal credited on the back. :lol:


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Postby Big V on Tue May 09, 2006 11:42 pm

Fozzie nice captures, I see the rain stayed away long enough for you to have some fun... The male lion has always been there, he is not the one from monarto.. As a side note, I found out where the black panther ended up - in the freezer, it died about 2 and half years ago and is being donated to a year 12 art student to disect for her art project..She is comparing the internal structure of the large cat to a human..doing the davinci type thing artwork.
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Postby mudder on Wed May 10, 2006 7:20 pm

Hey I really like the angle and moment of #1, even though the eyes are in shadow, there's still plenty of good eye detail...

If you wanna play with contrast with a curve or something just be careful not to lose detail in those gorgeous eyes... Maybe select the eyes, feather and invert the selection and then play with curves or levels?

Good eye detail makes the shot here I reckon...
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