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Postby pharmer on Tue May 16, 2006 3:43 pm

No ugly bokeh on this eh Peter? :D

No idea what this fruit is, just shot it walking past

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Postby PiroStitch on Tue May 16, 2006 3:46 pm

looks liek a very small apple.

nice creamy bokeh :D
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Postby Nnnnsic on Tue May 16, 2006 3:48 pm

Great shot.

One minor flaw which would have made it better.

I think you need just a little bit more of the twig in the shot.

It would've helped to balance the fruit hanging from that little bit of twig just that much more.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 16, 2006 3:55 pm

Nnnnsic wrote:Great shot.

One minor flaw which would have made it better.

I think you need just a little bit more of the twig in the shot.

It would've helped to balance the fruit hanging from that little bit of twig just that much more.


I think the man is right, just a little bit more (we are so greedy) think of the join between the two twigs as an elbow you need to give it a little space in the frame.
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