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Postby Michael on Fri May 12, 2006 11:02 pm

After a shoot for the local music zine I work for I saw some fire trucks down the stree (311A, 312A, 311L) and the area spare appliance, I went down to check it out to find out they were doing ICS training for one of the fire fighters doing a station officers course soon.

I was also surprised that the guys came up to me and said g'day using my first name and said I could go where I like, ( I must have done something right?)

anyway here is a pic Im still working on but I'd appreciate criticism.

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Postby sirhc55 on Fri May 12, 2006 11:24 pm

Michael - I really like this shot for its grittiness and the obvious comradeship shown
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Postby Michael on Fri May 12, 2006 11:24 pm

Thankyou chris :-)
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Postby Zeeke on Fri May 12, 2006 11:54 pm

As I just told you on MSN... I like this image, its probably one of the best ive seen from you... probably because im not into the grungey music shots which you do..

This really is mateship at its finest.. ... good work!

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Postby Michael on Fri May 12, 2006 11:59 pm

Thanks tim this is what I enjoy about photography most, the rewarding feeling when someone enjoys an image.

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Postby Matt. K on Sat May 13, 2006 12:33 am

Excellent shot and beautifully converted to black and white. A winner!
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Postby bindiblue on Sat May 13, 2006 7:57 am

Great shot michael,, love the black and white,


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Postby macka on Sat May 13, 2006 10:21 am

Lovely shot, and a nice B&W conversion. 8)
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Postby Marty on Sat May 13, 2006 10:44 am

Great shot,
get some prints and send them to the subjects.
Good b/w conversion.
Maybe burn in the highlight above the shoulder to match the rest of the b/g. And possibly the number plates (but thats what I would do).
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Postby marcotrov on Sat May 13, 2006 11:03 am

Love the shot. Very earthy feel Michael. Naturally posed and lovely sharpness and exposure. Is the industrial bin part of the comradeship :lol: I imagine D200? How are youo finding it as you begin to use it more? Pleased you got it and not the D2x, especially at the prices now offered by Birdy :)
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Postby Michael on Sat May 13, 2006 11:04 am

Marty wrote:Great shot,
get some prints and send them to the subjects.
Good b/w conversion.
Maybe burn in the highlight above the shoulder to match the rest of the b/g. And possibly the number plates (but thats what I would do).
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I know a few of the station officers on a first name basis from 11 so I usually email photos to them but I might see if they want prints for these ones.

thanks for the comments everyone.

noone thinks it's too dark or anything?


EDIT: Marcotrov: I wieghed up a few things and I could have gotten the D2x but the D200 does everything I need it to do less the price of a D2x so there really isn't any competition between the 2 really the D200 is here to stay I feel the D2x would be a little overkill for me anyhow.

The D200 is going fine I seem to be falling into a niche with its functions now and im finally getting back into the swing of things but so far its been superb.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat May 13, 2006 3:02 pm

Excellent shots Michael, I'd agree with Tim that his is one of the best I've seen from you, well done.
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Postby mudder on Sat May 13, 2006 3:54 pm

A terrific example of genuine mateship, good PP work too, the B&W really suits... Like the vignette too...

Not too dark for me, seems about right I reckon...
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Postby avkomp on Sat May 13, 2006 5:04 pm

I like this for the reasons already stated.

The only drawback for me is the garbo? thingy on the right which is a little distracting but nonetheless this is a good shot.

BW works well here.

well done.

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Postby Michael on Sat May 13, 2006 5:54 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone, much appreciated Im sure the guys at the station will like a copy of the image and I don't think I'll tweak it anymore.

thanks for your help :)
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Postby stubbsy on Sat May 13, 2006 6:16 pm

Michael

That is one awesome photo and is a brilliant example of what photography is all about. In that single slice of time there is a fantastic feel for the way these two guys get along and your PP brings an added strength to the shot that makes for an even better image.
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Postby Michael on Sun May 14, 2006 5:17 pm

I actually thought I'd get alot of comments opposite to what I got about lightness and what not, opens my eyes a bit that does.

thanks for the comments once again.
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Postby xerubus on Tue May 16, 2006 4:52 pm

very nicely done! particularly like the b&w treatment and the vignette...

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