Hand in marriage

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Hand in marriage

Postby Rainey on Tue Aug 08, 2006 3:26 pm

Hi, this is the first photo I have posted on this website for C&C. I had my wife model her hand so that I could try to capture the rings in detail. I don't have a lot of experience or equipment to work with yet so I am just using my new Canon EOS 350D with the 18-55mm kit lense.

I think the photo would have worked out better if I was able to bounce some light off the diamonds and if the rings had been cleaned directly prior to the shoot.

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No PP'ing, just resized and sharpened.

Comments welcome/encouraged.

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Postby blacknstormy on Tue Aug 08, 2006 3:31 pm

Nick - what a fantastic first post !!!
I love the clarity of the rings, and the lovely shallow DOF - drawing the eyes to where they are supposed to be.

A trick for this type of shot is to swing a led light (the small ones of course) on a cord above the hand out of the shot - gives a lovely twinkle to the diamonds :) Try it - I promise it works.

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Postby Rainey on Tue Aug 08, 2006 3:40 pm

Wow, thank you for your kind response! Such a great idea you present, I will definately have to give that another try if my wife has enough patience for me. I will make sure I post results if I get a chance to try it out. :D
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Postby Nnnnsic on Tue Aug 08, 2006 3:52 pm

Not bad for a kit lens at all.

Nice shot! :up:
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Aug 08, 2006 4:05 pm

Excellent shot for first pic post Nick - nice close focussing too :D
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Postby ozimax on Tue Aug 08, 2006 5:09 pm

Wonderful photo Nick, really good and sharp where it counts. You could always add a small "glint" in PS, but that's most probably a bit corny for a serious shot like this, Max[/u]
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Postby avkomp on Tue Aug 08, 2006 6:39 pm

good image for a first post well done


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Postby marcotrov on Tue Aug 08, 2006 7:47 pm

Terrific image sharp great exposure, excellent warm skin tones. :)
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Postby rooboy on Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:37 pm

DOF is just perfect, and it's always good to see excellent work out of budget glass :)
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Postby johnd on Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:43 pm

Nice image Nick. As has been said the dof works well with the sharpness of the rings.
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Postby jethro on Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:03 pm

Exceptional image and sharpness! Well done
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Postby padey on Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:12 am

Nick,

That hand looks a bit sickly yellow. WB is off.

Nice composure.
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Postby mark on Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:19 am

Another great example of kit lens capability. :wink:
Nice shot Nick.
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Postby Manta on Wed Aug 09, 2006 9:24 am

rooboy wrote:always good to see excellent work out of budget glass :)


I'm sure the ring is genuine!! :)

Terrific shot Nick. I can't add to the superlatives already given here. :wink: Look forward to more of your work.
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Postby Rainey on Thu Aug 10, 2006 12:28 pm

Thanks once again for everyones comments, they have been very encouraging!

JohnD, your right there must be a few of us. TassieD is another name I recognise. I will be meeting David on Sunday at Baskerville to take some shots of the HSCC display, hopefully I'll get some more practise in then.
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