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Postby Pa on Sun Sep 03, 2006 9:32 am

not really just another sunrise taken at 6.04

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this was taken at 5.41am.its a 20 second exposure.

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thanks for looking c&c welcome
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Postby MATT on Sun Sep 03, 2006 10:54 am

PA the first one has a lovely sky, bt the second has a lovely misty sea.

Maybe combine the 2 ??

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Postby Oscar on Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:16 pm

Hi Pa, Think I agree with Matt here. Combine the two and cropped to a wide pano I think it would look great. (look out for the horizon police though - shot 2) :) . Cheers, Mick
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Postby Pa on Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:09 am

thanks for comment mat and oscar,i straitened the horizon.
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Postby Oscar on Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:57 am

Pa, the second looks much better now. The sky in the first one is awesome - would still like to see a cut and paste over the sky in the second - I think it would look awesome. Cheers, Mick
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Postby Pa on Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:02 am

i'm not sure how to do it,i'll see if my son can help me try it.
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