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Adult Content: Mapplethorpe

Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:10 am

Probably best not to view this at work.

Unless you work at a sex shop.

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Ingredients: $2 mousetrap, $2.50 motorised Wind-Up Supra Jolly Pecker with the motor removed, tartare sauce, lubricant, fake blood (one of the various types I've made).

It's a wee bit different to the sort of image I'd normally shoot or post, but I wanted to try something a bit extreme... a bit Mapplethorpish... so it's almost a tribute... except it probably isn't unless it is... what do people think?
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Postby Steffen on Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:37 am

Hmm, where to start? First of all, I don't think the image warrants all those warnings of yours... :)

I'm still trying to decipher it, esp the various bits of debris and fragments lying around. The lighting is very suggestive, but I haven't found out yet of what.

My only critique point so far would be that all the bodily fluids look very fake.

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Postby elffinarts on Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:09 am

I'm glad it's fake!! :lol:
I do like the lighting.
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Postby Alex on Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:10 am

Leigh,

I like it. Very unusual and creative. I'd agree though that fluids look very fake, e.g. blood doesn't look saturated enough. My first impression was that it was an egg masacre :-)

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Postby Glen on Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:09 pm

I like it and think it is very creative. I also agree the fake blood is probably not the right formula for close up work
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Postby Justin on Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:18 pm

Surely you could have used the real stuff for this - dedication to your art and all that...

It's a good shot and slightly confronting, but it almost like a spoof (if you will excuse the pun) on a confronting shot, I guess the fakeness of everything adds a lighter element to it. hmm I am not sure i am getting this across
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Postby Laurie on Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:25 pm

Alex wrote:Leigh,

I like it. Very unusual and creative. I'd agree though that fluids look very fake, e.g. blood doesn't look saturated enough. My first impression was that it was an egg masacre :-)

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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Sep 04, 2006 4:45 pm

Glen wrote:I also agree the fake blood is probably not the right formula for close up work


Bugger.

Should've used the thicker stuff I've got laying around.
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Postby gstark on Mon Sep 04, 2006 5:57 pm

Nnnnsic wrote:
Glen wrote:I also agree the fake blood is probably not the right formula for close up work


Bugger.

Should've used the thicker stuff I've got laying around.


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Postby Manta on Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:09 pm

What bait did you use?
Or maybe you'd better not answer that...
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Postby moggy on Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:13 pm

My eyes were definitely watering looking at this shot but Gary's reply of "Yeth!" cracked me up! :lol: :lol:

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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:28 pm

Manta wrote:What bait did you use?
Or maybe you'd better not answer that...


You've just given me my next idea!
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Postby gstark on Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:11 pm

Simon,

Jail. :)
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Postby christiand on Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:55 pm

This is S I C K :shock:

Things that some men get up to :cry:
I hope you got it repaired allright :wink:

Anyway, I prefer the TV add of the piano playing dudes :lol:

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Postby mic on Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:34 pm

There seems to be a plague of those little varmints around lately, Very creative leigh.

There is a another I now know that is as sick as me in our futile minds.

Well done.

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Postby Killakoala on Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:26 pm

Leigh, that's one of those images that makes me want to cross my legs.

'Interesting' is an view i will give you. I look forward to your next idea :)
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Postby Nnnnsic on Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:29 pm

That's actually the second time someone has told me that over this image.

I'm just in a experimental mood when it comes to photography, I think. I think I'm trying out some rather radical ideas from my point of view to see if I can enjoy the act of the setup and then the act of taking the picture.
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Postby gstark on Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:57 pm

mic wrote:There is a another I now know that is as sick as me in our futile minds.


You're both just beginners when ot comes to sick. Who do you think Leigh has as his role model and mentor ? :twisted:
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