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riverfire 2006

Postby griffo on Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:30 pm

a couple of photos from Toowong

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Postby avkomp on Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:34 pm

like the first one a lot, well done
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Postby the foto fanatic on Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:37 pm

Nice pix griffo. Good work getting the F111 trail like that.
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Postby Pa on Sun Sep 03, 2006 1:40 pm

like both of them griffo,i assume thats the jet trail in the second.
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Postby Willy wombat on Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:20 pm

Both of them are nice shots. Well captured. Could you please post the exif for #1.

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Postby Blackspear on Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:52 pm

Pa wrote:...i assume thats the jet trail in the second.

Did someone say mother-in-laws broom afterburner :shock: :D


Both really nice shots, hard to pick between the two.

Well done

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Postby griffo on Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:37 pm

Photo #1 Exif Data
2006/09/02 19:08:24.1
Compressed RAW (12-bit)
Lens: VR 18-200mm F/3.5-5.6 G
Focal Length: 18mm
Exposure Mode: Manual
Metering Mode: Spot
10 sec - F/7.1
Exposure Comp.: 0 EV
Sensitivity: ISO 200
Optimize Image: Custom
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: Manual
Color Mode: Mode IIIa (sRGB)


Photo #2 Exif Data
2006/09/02 18:59:28.1
Compressed RAW (12-bit)
Lens: VR 18-200mm F/3.5-5.6 G
Focal Length: 18mm
Exposure Mode: Manual
Metering Mode: Spot
10 sec - F/5.6
Exposure Comp.: 0 EV
Sensitivity: ISO 320
Optimize Image: Custom
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: Manual
Color Mode: Mode IIIa (sRGB)
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Postby zafra52 on Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:04 pm

My River of Fire pics are pathetic in comparison. I took my little Olympus because I thought it would be too crowded to take tripods and the Canon, so I guess I paid the price. Well done!
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Flash?

Postby zafra52 on Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:12 pm

Griffo, how did you get them? Did you use the flash to freeze movement? I've been having trouble taking pictures at night in raw format, let alone fireworks. I guess I have a lot to learn yet... Again well done, your pics are excellent.
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Re: Flash?

Postby griffo on Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:13 pm

zafra - just kept it really simple - tripod, long exposure, focus at infinity. The F-111 photo was approx 2.5km away, but the fireworks were quite a bit closer (50-60m), hence a smaller apeture.

I didn't use flash in any of them, although in hindsight I thought I should have used some fill flash and taken some photos from behind the crowd, to capture the human element, although you'd still need the long exposure to catch the trails.
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Postby asaroha on Tue Sep 05, 2006 6:16 pm

Awesome pics. Newbie question, but why would you want bigger aperture for further subjects and smaller aperture for closer subject. Any relationship between the two ?
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Postby griffo on Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:04 pm

asaroha - it was more an afterthought than anything - honestly.

The F-111 was a long way away, and as such the focus was at infinity meaning DOF was not a big issue - hence the wide apeture, whereas the closer fireworks had the focus ring back from the infinity stop, so I guess a smaller apeture would give a slightly longer depth of focus.

now I'm confused!?!

having said that - my apetures are the wrong way around for my reasoning - like I said afterthought more than intention!
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Sep 05, 2006 11:56 pm

Griffo - Cheers for the exif. I would have expected a slightly higher F stop (eg F11) for the first shot, but you have done well. If it aint broken dont fix it :D
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Postby hash77 on Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:02 am

Oh Wow! I wish I didn't have to work that evening! Thanks for the exif data, I've been curious about firework photos. V. upset I missed out... and I live at Toowong!

Well done! F-111 photo rocks!
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Postby Aussie Dave on Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:03 am

Griffo
Both very nice photos. My pick is the second one, bacause it's not something you see every day, whereas the fireworks image (although nicely taken) is IMO just another fireworks pic.

The image with the F-111 trail I find quite interesting and overlooking the blown highlights in the water, which would have been difficult to get away from, this photo makes me think what is going to happen next....which I find appealing.

Great job :)
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Postby DVEous on Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:13 am

... Obsolete ...
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Postby griffo on Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:23 pm

VK4CP wrote:It would be interesting to know how many seconds were between activating the shutter and the F1-11 actually entering frame?


it was only maybe 4 seconds, but not all of the fire trail shows in the photo (obviously). I was listening to the radio where they "talk in" the aircraft (probably pre-recorded) and from Toowong you can actually see the aircraft nav lights as they scoot across Annerley on their terrain following radar....by the time you see the red lights and hit the button they're already starting to dump and light the burners....you have to be ready.

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F111

Postby zafra52 on Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:41 am

I guess the issue here, and thanks for the EXIF data, is that you were quite away from the action and therefore had a few extra seconds and more room at your disposal. Those of us at Kangaroo Point, being closer to the action had less time and more people interference to contend with. I am not making excuses for myself and I thank you Griffo for the photos, the technical data, and what is more important the technical tips. Very nice photos indeed!
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Postby adam on Sat Sep 09, 2006 2:11 pm

The 2nd pic of the trail is my favourite!!
It's very nice, amazing :) Really a fire in the sky!
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