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Derelict Control Tower
Old Laverton RAAF control tower. Geelong Rd Laveton, Vic.
Mike,
I'd like to see this lightened a little, and the contrast increased. It looks too soft in terms of the contrast to me.... g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
I agree with Gary, too dark, too soft, not enough contrast - I suspect that the creepy vibe you seem to be going for here wouldnt have needed such drastic treatment.
Great subject to shoot though, I would love to explore that place!
Mike
I kinda get a sense where you are trying to go with this and you almost got it. As the others have suggested...just a tad lighter in the tower. It would come to life printed on quality matt paper with a light sepia added. Regards
Matt. K
I'm going to try some changes to this image.
I did think of exploring the interior, however i believe it contains aspestos and is COVERED in "layer upon layer" of wild pigeon shit...... (can we spell Cryptococcosis or Psittacosis)
I go past that tower everyday when I go to work on either the train or the car. I have often looked at it, and wondered what it would be like closer. Is it accessible to the general public?
The image looks good in B/W. Very stark and imposing.
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