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The Chair

Postby MattyO on Sat Oct 21, 2006 12:08 pm

I took this photo a while back, i know it has potential once it has been PP correctly, but im unsure if I have the ability to do so.

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Postby gstark on Sat Oct 21, 2006 12:20 pm

I love this exactly how it stands.

The treatment suits the subject very nicely. Do nothing else.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Oct 21, 2006 12:22 pm

I agree with Gary - this is a wonderful and simplistic shot that stands out on its own :)
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Postby sammys on Sat Oct 21, 2006 1:09 pm

The exposure is spot on with the fog perfectly captured. I'm simply a n00b so please take what I say with a grain of salt. Other than the exposure I can't see what the message or subject of the photo is. Could one of you composition masters fill in the gaps?
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Postby gstark on Sat Oct 21, 2006 1:58 pm

sammys,

I'm certainly no expert, and certainly not a master, but this image is exactly what it seems to be ... a very simple image of a park bench under a tree, on a foggy day.

In B&W. That's important.

What it does for me though is evoke memories of my younger days ... cold drizzly winter mornings in Sydney, or perhaps lunchtime on an autumn day in Queens Park in London.

That's where this image shines - despite its simplicity it has the capacity to evoke strong memories and thus create a feeling of emotion in this viewer.

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Postby meicw on Sat Oct 21, 2006 7:17 pm

I agree. That is a great simple shot. Doesn't want any more work on it.
Very evocative of cold winter days in Norfolk.

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Postby zafra52 on Sat Oct 21, 2006 9:00 pm

I agree what has been said so far. Leave as it is. It is a lovely and sharp picture. However, having said so, we have to admit that what we see at the current resolution and dimensions on a computer screen may not be what is printed.
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Postby Rainey on Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:58 am

Hey Matty, you know what I think of this shot. The first time I saw it, I knew it had such great potential, it is perfectly simplistic and incredibly eerie.
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Postby Oscar on Sun Oct 22, 2006 1:25 pm

Lovely contrast, nice DOF with the foggy background. A lovely stark soliitary scene. Well done indeed, Matty. Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby MattyO on Sun Oct 22, 2006 1:46 pm

Thank you for the kind words everyone. It was taken at night on a really foggy oval. I saw the chair and used the tree to frame the shot. I always thought this shot had potential, i just needed to do the right post processing.

I am struggling to find a name for this shot however, does anyone have any suggestions???
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Postby mic on Sun Oct 22, 2006 8:05 pm

I luv it, but think it would convey a much more emotional message if it had a person slumped over on the chair in deep depression.

Very moody shot.

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