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B1 & B2

Postby TC on Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:14 am

my first post, so please be gentle

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Postby Killakoala on Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:55 am

Welcome to the forum TC. I tell you what, i'd hate to be the guy on the rear seat, unless Charlize Theron was on the front seat.

Your panning technique is good, but i would prefer to see more blurring of the background. (But that's me)
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Postby Tim on Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:19 am

mmmm... Charlize Theron
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Postby MHD on Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:33 am

Nice shot, what gear was it shot on?

As a critique I would say that the shadows are a little harsh, I dont know how far away you were or what shutter speed you were using but a little fill flash may have helped elimanate some of those shadows...

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Postby TC on Mon Mar 12, 2007 9:16 pm

MHD wrote:Nice shot, what gear was it shot on?

As a critique I would say that the shadows are a little harsh, I dont know how far away you were or what shutter speed you were using but a little fill flash may have helped elimanate some of those shadows...

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Thanks, D50 with 18-55mm kit lens, speed =1/640, distance 5m, I have to get a flash. Would a SB400 do the trick?
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