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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:39 am
I got a chance to do another wedding and this time was much easier than the last, in particular because the couple wanted lots of photos taken, so I didn't feel like I was getting in the way on their day.
Here are a couple of shots, the rest can be found here: (I will be updating over the next few days.)
http://www.ausphotos.com/gallery/v/JenandBrad/
ISO 200 1/80, f 4.5 kit lens @ 56mm
ISO 200 1/100 f1.8 50mm lens
ISO 200 1/100 f 5.0 kit lens @ 70mm
ISO 200 1/125 f 5.6 kit lens @ 52mm
It was a love job - no money changing hands so I didn't feel a great deal of pressure. However, they were still relying on me to get take the photos and I checked numerous times to make sure I hadn't lost the filled flash card!
Anyway, it was a beautiful day.
Thanks for checking them out.
Owen.
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by Kris on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:15 am
Nice! I want to get into this eventually! Three would be great if the bride had a nice smile, she seems a bit worried 
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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:28 am
I've thought about it - but I enjoy having my weekends. Maybe eventually when I have kids and stuff and I need some time to myself I might think about doing it
It was a good experience though. I have another shot of her coming out of the car - it's on an angle and she's looking much happier 
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by Geoff on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:34 am
Some lovely shots there Owen. If they are like the rest of your shoot from the day then you should be proud of your efforts. Weddings aren't easy, but when you get the shots and then you see a resultant happy bride and groom it really makes it all worth while. Well done sunshine!
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by macka on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:41 am
Owen, overall some nice shots, but I'm not a big fan of your black and white conversion in #1. You seem to have brought out the red tones in her skin and it's making her look very grey. Not sure what method you used but there are plenty to try, so perhaps have a go at another one...
I'd also have a go at removing some of the shine on the groom's face in #4.
Otherwise, quite nice. 
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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:44 am
Thanks Geoff and Macka. Some good suggestions which I'll have a go at
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by shutterbug on Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:16 am
Hi Owen,
No. 2 is great
Do you also capture some wide angle images?
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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:24 am
Hi Vince.
Yeah I got a few wide angle ones of the beach wedding, nothing very inspiring though - just as a record of what the scene was like. I'll post more a bit later.
Thanks for looking mate,
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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:44 pm
A few more images:
ISO 200 f9.0 1/80 kit lens @ 70mm
ISO 800 f 2.8 1/50 50mm lens
ISO 800 f 2.8 1/50 50mm lens
ISO 400 1/40 f2.8 50mm lens.
(I felt this little lady deserved her own thread.)
So many more to go through!
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by padey on Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:04 pm
Could you post some exif data with your photos please.
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by macka on Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:50 pm
padey wrote:Could you post some exif data with your photos please.
Padey, if you're using firefox, you can get an extension called FxIF which allows you to right click and view "properties" or all intact exif data. Owen's data is intact. Very handy little tool.
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by padey on Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:01 pm
macka wrote:padey wrote:Could you post some exif data with your photos please.
Padey, if you're using firefox, you can get an extension called FxIF which allows you to right click and view "properties" or all intact exif data. Owen's data is intact. Very handy little tool.
not using firefox. And after the recent comments regarding C&C, i'd like to give some genuine C&C as oppose to showcasing.
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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:45 pm
Hi Padey. My apologies, I'm not really good with posting the EXIF along with the photos. I've edited the photos with the details now.
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by wendellt on Mon Mar 26, 2007 8:13 pm
hi owen
the bubble shot is great the lift is soft and the exposure and moment captured nailed, your best shot
the shot with the bride and bridesmaids is good too but i dont think you needed to shoot that at f9 it looks dark and underexposed shots dont do skintones justice
f4.5 would be enough dof for that shot at that range
but you can easily brighten it up
as for bride and groom shot front on flash increases the incidence of highlight on wet(sweaty) faces one way to soften that effect is to use a bounch card or bounch flash or put a huge difusser on your flash
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by padey on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:22 pm
owen wrote:A few more images:  ISO 200 f9.0 1/80 kit lens @ 70mm
hi owen Group shots need DoF, but this isn't a really big group, and f9 is underexposing the image a bit. This is causing the background to be virtually non existent and the third bridesmaid to be a shadow of her real self. owen wrote: ISO 800 f 2.8 1/50 50mm lens  ISO 800 f 2.8 1/50 50mm lens
Without lifting the ISO you really need to tripod these images. 1/50th is about as slow as you want to go hand held, until you risk entering camera shake. As such they are underexposed. Sometimes tripods just get in the way, so setting your camera up on a table for a several second exposure can result in good images. owen wrote: ISO 400 1/40 f2.8 50mm lens. (I felt this little lady deserved her own thread.) So many more to go through!
This is a fantastic candid image. Regarding the crop. I gather the final result for this image will be print. So a 4:3 ratio will save headaches. One thing i found when printing the fred hollows images is what passes on web can be poor vision corrected by crop, as such can cause pain in print. In this case it's good vision, and my guess is you saw it, moved as fast as you could to get the shot before she stopped blowing bubbles. Sometimes at weddings you can't press the shutter fast enough. But if that is the final destination for these images, you should keep that in mind when PP. I mention this because i notice this crop in an earlier image.
Regarding the image itself, if you bumped the ISO you could have pulled back the flash and captured a bit of more ambient light.
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by owen on Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:40 pm
Thanks wendell and padey for the comments and help. As was mentioned above there are highlights on a few portraits despite me using the lightsphere on all shots. It is something that I myself don't see when reviewing the images, but your trained eyes do - so thanks for pointing it out
The shot with the 3 ladies was shot at f9 to get it as sharp as possible (4.5 on the kit lens isn't very sharp) and also to get them all in focus as the lens was at 70mm, and f 4.5 would have probably rendered the 2 bridesmaids out of focus. As it was the last one was starting to get a bit soft at f9.
Padey, my final destination for the images is a wedding album where we will probably cut the images to be similar to the cropped web shots, but thanks for pointing them out. By the way, wouldn't a 2:3 be better if I was printing them 4 x 6?
I appreciate the time taken to review the images and comment on how they can be better.
Many thanks,
Owen.
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by padey on Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:53 pm
Sorry, meant 2:3....
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