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Few from a Fashion experience! ( Thanks Wendell )

Postby Jeko70 on Sun Apr 08, 2007 7:11 pm

First
I want to thank Wendell for the "Beauty/Full" experience.

After that

#1
Image

#2
Image

#3
Image

#4
Image

C+C welcomed

Cheers

Fab
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Apr 08, 2007 11:46 pm

Fab
That's a nice way to spend the day! :D
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:00 am

Very good first steps, worth of golds :D
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Postby wendellt on Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:05 am

fab

thankyou for your assistance

i like the 3rd one available light is better than front on flash model looks surprised in the last shot
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:50 pm

The #3 is my favourite in this set.. works very well

#4 I like this the background is great.. if anything the subject feels a little over flashed

#2 and #1 for me suffer from tight crops with bits going out of frame which is a little distracting..
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Postby Jeko70 on Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:29 pm

Thanks guys,

I agree, some mistake done!
I'm not so familiar on this field, rush, lighting, beauty, posing, fame etc etc etc......
But from mistakes/comments/corrections I can improve.

A phylosopher was saying.....
Know your past, past mistakes, make your future.
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