Jade plant

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Jade plant

Postby Reschsmooth on Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:06 pm

We had a fantastic sunset on Sunday evening, so wanted to capture our jade plant with the sunset in the background - unfortunately I couldn't frame it as well as I wanted as I was otherwise surrounded by architecture.

C&C appreciated.

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Postby surenj on Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:59 pm

Good isolation of subject (jade) from the background but unfortunately the direct harsh flash somewhat detracts from the general mood. Perhaps toning the flash down with a diffuser may have helped..

Was your subject the sunset or the plant? if it was the sunset you could have gone for a silhoutte..?
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Postby Reschsmooth on Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:41 am

Thanks Surenj,

The subject was the jade plant, but trying to get some dramatic sunset background going. The actual sunset wasn't as dark as it appears, but I wanted to underexpose the background a little with a fast shutter speed and use the flash to maintain exposure on the jade plant. I accept your comment about the harsh flash, however, the rapidly fading sunset didn't permit too much time to set things up better. From memory, I was using about -2 FEC with TTL BL on the flash.

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