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Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

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Postby viper1968 on Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:10 pm

Here is a picture I took a fewdays ago at a childs 3rd birthday party. This little guys was playing hide and seek with me..

I'm interested to see what others think of the shot.

Cheers
Andy

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Postby surenj on Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:56 pm

Love the expression and the catch lights but not sure about the vertical lines...in some ways they frame the image but in others it detracts from it..... Try a tighter crop and see whether you like it better
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Apr 11, 2007 11:38 am

I like it, the twinkle of mischief in his mind, the cheeky grin.. very nice, it's also well exposed which may of been difficult with the light from behind and the railings in the foreground.
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Postby Oscar on Wed Apr 11, 2007 11:48 am

Andy, I think this is a lovely candid. It works very well for me in B&W. Shame the handrail is in the top left of frame (not much you could do about that) but IMHO it is still a great shot.

Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby viper1968 on Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:59 pm

Thanks for the feedback. I am the same the bars seem to frame the boy but also take something away. What I do like is the mischievious look he has on his face
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