A few faves from the Avalon airshow

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A few faves from the Avalon airshow

Postby cordy on Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:15 pm

C&C welcome

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And of course the old faithful, dump and burn :D

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Postby Tim on Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:36 pm

Love the heat haze in #2. Well done!
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Postby greencardigan on Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:37 am

I feel that #2 would be better with a looser crop. Love the exhaust effect too.

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Postby Glen on Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:45 am

Cordy, all well caught
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:49 am

Very nice collection, and very sharp, can I ask what lens and settings you were using ?
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Postby cordy on Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:11 pm

Canon 90-300USM. I think from memory around F5, ISO100

The long end of this lens leaves a bit to be desired, will be sourcing a 400mm by the next airshow I attend (that and you really do need 400mm to get some of the high action shots, 300mm just does not cut it)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:32 pm

Well Cordy I'm most impressed by the apparent sharpness in these shots, even if you find the 90-300 lacking at the long end (lacking sharpness, speed, or a combination of the two?). I do have to ask, are all these shots the full frame, or have you cropped them, as with each I feel like I'd like a little more breathing space between the edge of frame and the subject.
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Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Mar 27, 2007 1:06 pm

The sharpness on the right hand side of No 2 is fantastic - it reminds me of a Tamiya model aircraft from my distant childhood days! As others have said, a wider crop would be better, I think.

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Postby cordy on Tue Mar 27, 2007 2:31 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Well Cordy I'm most impressed by the apparent sharpness in these shots, even if you find the 90-300 lacking at the long end (lacking sharpness, speed, or a combination of the two?). I do have to ask, are all these shots the full frame, or have you cropped them, as with each I feel like I'd like a little more breathing space between the edge of frame and the subject.


The lens lacks some sharpness and is definitely not as fast as I would like, to shoot fast jets anyway. There was some pp done to the shots, but not a lot - one USM pass, levels

The only shot that is full frame from memory is the 2nd one, the two others are cropped. With aircraft photos I dont like leaving too much "dead space" around the aircraft, but still like to maintain a 6x4 ratio of sorts - its a habit I have gotten into with these style of shots.

I can actually see where Canon's IS will help me significantly in creating crisper images and the 100-400mm lens I've been looking at has IS. That and I find it easier to keep a heavier lens steadier, I tend to move a small lens around a bit too rapidly

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Postby Ghetto Panda on Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:34 pm

I'm gonna go the opposite and say i reckon the tight crops are great, number 2 is my pic because of the sharpness and the heat haze.
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Postby wendellt on Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:44 pm

technically awesome
must be extremely hard to shoot planes flying that fast
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Postby cordy on Tue Mar 27, 2007 4:01 pm

wendellt wrote:technically awesome
must be extremely hard to shoot planes flying that fast


Quite, its a case of requiring fast AF and shooting continuous. Some of these jets were seriously moving too, 600-700 kts (1000 kmh)
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Re: A few faves from the Avalon airshow

Postby tcsphoto on Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:56 am

1 and 2 are outstanding. Makes me want to go to an airshow this year.
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Postby devilla101 on Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:15 am

Dang, some cool images. Especially the 1 and 2 with the extra bits caught on camera
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