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Dark & SteamyTwo "story" shots from the "Firebox Photo Event" at Maitland steamfest. I have lots more from Steamfest to process but these are two early standouts which to me asked for quite different treatments despite the similar subject matter and timeframe.
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#2 is better, but I like the fact that on the 2nd viewing of #1 I saw a ghost
![]() Completely missed the guy in there when I first looked. Heard some trains tooting this arvo and was wondering at the unusual horns. Finally worked out it was the steamfest. Had forgotten about it, and I was meaning to take some shots in the morning. ![]() - Nick
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I like them both, I think #1 is the better of the two (against the grain), but #2 is a fine shot as well.
great shots Peter, both work
![]() I have had a quick look at mine.... I don't think I will post them yours are much better
Peter,
Great work. Crop #2 on the bottom, leaving the light and shade on the ground where the lisght is coming in from the left: crop immediately below where that light ends on the bottom right. Let me know what you think. g.
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very good peter....... but tend to agree with gary, try cropping the bottom of 2 for more impack......
Cheers ....bp....
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Great shots Peter,
love them both. I'll also put my voice to cropping the bottom of #2. The water reflection takes your eyes away just a bit from the "action". It was a great day at Steamfest and the Firebox event was great time, even if the trains were late getting there. Yip, they had big floodlights as this was around 9:30pm. Thanks for organising the outing Peter. Hope you got some good shots on Sunday. cheers, André Photography, as a powerful medium of expression and communications, offers an infinite variety of perception, interpretation and execution. Ansel Adams
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#2! very well done mate.
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Thanks you all for the feedback. I purposely didn't point out the man in #1 to see if he stood out enough to make the image work. It would seem some saw him and some didn't. As for cropping #2 I prevaricated over that too and will go back and have a play and repost here
Peter
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great shots peter, as i said to someone else i left my damn phone at home so cldnt contact you guys, i went to the rally yard for a little bit then to oakhampton station and the cemetary near there but i cldnt wait around all day for the steamers
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Michael - shame we didn't meet up
Below is a recrop of #2 along with another image from the same nighttime session. ![]() ![]() Peter
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Last one is superb peter
![]() Will pass onto my father who's worked on the railways for 40 years now, he'll absolutely love it!
It looks like this was a great meet.
#2 is definately the better one here as already said it has a defined point of interest. Your treatment (as usual) is excellent Peter. The 3rd one is even better. This has a very nostaglic feel to it. Geoff
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Stubbsy,
Great stuff, but couldn't you have got a long lanky nude female to be in that 2nd ![]() Seriously though, great thought, imagination, Composition, Equipment & you Mic ![]()
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