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Postby poompy on Mon May 07, 2007 9:44 am

Hey,

I havent posted in a while as i havent been able to take photos due physical limitations, but we will leave it there, no need to tell you my life story.

However my wife is 35 weeks pregnant now (34 weeks pregnant in this picture). My goal was to get something that would look great printed (big) and that we were both proud of and not ashamed to show off.

here is the result. a big thanks goes to my wifes step dad for providing the lighting.

A strobe pointed at her almost from side on and a backlight to give some definiton to her back.

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Postby Alex on Mon May 07, 2007 9:47 am

It's a beautiful image. The lighting is superb. Love the rim lighting on her back.

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Postby Reschsmooth on Mon May 07, 2007 9:51 am

Great photos - the subtle low key lighting works wonders.

Well done.

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Postby Oscar on Mon May 07, 2007 10:04 am

A lovely image, poompy.

Lighting and PP treatment work wonderfully well.

Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby ATJ on Mon May 07, 2007 10:12 am

poompy,

That is an excellent image and really shows off the "moment". Lighting is excellent.

What is most important is what you and your wife think of it as the image is for you guys.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon May 07, 2007 10:20 am

You both should be justifiably proud of this shot. The rim lighting on your wife's back makes the image really sing. And thanks to the two of you for being comfortable enough to share this image.
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Postby poompy on Mon May 07, 2007 10:20 am

thanks for the comments guys,
the image means a lot to my wife and i as it is our first born, so we are both very excited and proud of the image.

i really felt nervous coming into the photoshoot as i had never used any sort of lighting except for a flash other than the onboard.

we are planning on getting it printer at 40x50cm just need to find a place that will do it.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Mon May 07, 2007 10:35 am

This is a terrific photograph, and will be a great family memento.
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Postby Marvin on Mon May 07, 2007 10:55 am

Beautiful.
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Postby makario on Mon May 07, 2007 11:24 am

wow, this is a really gorgeous image!! Love the lighting especially.
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Postby tbgphoto on Mon May 07, 2007 11:29 am

This is a truely impressive image, I love the lighting.

I'm impress by the sharpness as well given the lens you used.
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Postby Hudo on Mon May 07, 2007 11:47 am

Hey,

Great timing. Despite shooting hundreds of models from fashion, nudes through to fetish / alternative we have never done a "mother in waiting" shoot. We'll tomorrow night we have out first and I drew inspiration from your post so many thanks for sharing this with us.

Thanks,

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Postby poompy on Mon May 07, 2007 12:59 pm

Hudo wrote:Hey,

Great timing. Despite shooting hundreds of models from fashion, nudes through to fetish / alternative we have never done a "mother in waiting" shoot. We'll tomorrow night we have out first and I drew inspiration from your post so many thanks for sharing this with us.

Thanks,

Mark

no worries, had a look at your site, some nice photos, didnt think it would be possible for me to give soem inspiration.. :lol:

thanks guys, really appreciate the comments, :D

i have noticed the kits lense can perform pretty well if it is given the right conditions.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon May 07, 2007 1:25 pm

Pro’s

Beautiful pose and tastefully done
Lighting superb
Sharp
Keylighting works very well
Similar to the style of Greg Gorman - excellent

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Postby poompy on Mon May 07, 2007 1:53 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Pro’s

Beautiful pose and tastefully done
Lighting superb
Sharp
Keylighting works very well
Similar to the style of Greg Gorman - excellent

Con’s

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:shock: wow, thanks!

does anyone know of a place to get this printed at 40x50cm (16inx20in) on the northern beaches or even online?
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Postby Nikkofan on Mon May 07, 2007 4:17 pm

If you can't find something up near you, Just Photos in Mortdale (Chris Bennett - 9570.3336) will do it & send it back to you. They are excellent.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon May 07, 2007 4:42 pm

Another recommendation for Chris at Just Photos, we do our printing there and enjoy the extra level of service and quality of the prints.
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Postby poompy on Mon May 07, 2007 5:20 pm

thanks :up: will definately keep them in mind.
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Postby MATT on Mon May 07, 2007 5:58 pm

Yes beautiful use of light...Something truly to be proud of.

May be this thread for a free print?? Dont know if it is still available though

http://dslrusers.com/viewtopic.php?t=25861&highlight=


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Postby zafra52 on Mon May 07, 2007 6:57 pm

It is a lovely picture and I will look forward to see the follow-up picture of mother and child.
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Postby Geoff on Tue May 08, 2007 9:13 pm

Poompy - a sensational shot!
I'm a bit late commenting on this image and feel I would only be repeating what has already been said.

As far as printing on the Northern Beaches.

http://www.c41express.com.au/ have a good reputation.
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Postby poompy on Wed May 09, 2007 9:29 am

Geoff wrote:Poompy - a sensational shot!
I'm a bit late commenting on this image and feel I would only be repeating what has already been said.

As far as printing on the Northern Beaches.

http://www.c41express.com.au/ have a good reputation.


never too late, :lol:
thanks for the link.
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Postby Fortigurn on Wed May 09, 2007 1:11 pm

Fantastic lighting (I've become addicted to Strobist recently, and this is textbook stuff), crystal clear, very discreetly and tastefully posed, and an evocative image. Well done all round.
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Postby Matt. K on Wed May 09, 2007 6:40 pm

A strong, dramatic image! If you get the time try a high key image! I would love to see what you can produce at the other end of the tonal scale.
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Postby wendellt on Wed May 09, 2007 6:47 pm

i bet you were inspired

excellent lighting composition tone everything
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Postby BBJ on Thu May 10, 2007 2:04 am

Well not much i can say that hasn't been said except well done and a great photo.

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Postby jethro on Thu May 10, 2007 7:31 am

You have to be happy with that shot. What a memory!
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Postby poompy on Thu May 10, 2007 9:20 am

thanks everyone for the encouraging comments. i have never received such a response to my photos before :lol:

i will be trying something similar with mum and baby, once the time is right. I would also like to try and get a shot of myself with the baby, sort of a series.
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Postby surenj on Fri May 11, 2007 1:20 am

Don't go for just a print....go canvas I say! Awesome shot...love that light...
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