Above river full of crocodiles .... wild birds.

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Above river full of crocodiles .... wild birds.

Postby camrak on Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:04 pm

Just few another shots from Top End :)
These birds (species) are kites :?:
Photos was taken from the boat (without tripod or VR) - this explain few problems with the focus ;)



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Postby Oneputt on Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:32 pm

That first is brilliant. Just enough blur to show the action. Love it :D
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Postby SteveGriffin on Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:35 pm

The first shot is a beauti! Be proud!!
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Jun 18, 2007 7:15 pm

#1 is simply superb and #4 not far behind :)
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:38 pm

The first one, brilliant.
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Postby big pix on Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:46 pm

I like these ........ but I have found shooting birds on the wing, you have got to use a fast shutter speed to stop any movement and action say 1000s plus
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Postby camrak on Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:02 pm

big pix - but if I use 1000s plus I loose all movement dynamic feeling, and this will be just plastic bird.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:59 pm

Beautiful! And I like the sense of movement.
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Postby ozimax on Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:18 pm

Nice pictures of a majestic bird, well done.
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Postby crackatoea on Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:17 pm

The focus point on the bird in the first photo is so small but you nailed it which leaves the rest of the bird slightly blurred. I like the effect.
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Postby bwhinnen on Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:18 am

Where were these taken? The Wildlife park or on the Adelaide River cruise?

They are either a Whistling Kite or a Black Shouldered Kite :) Probably the former. So many around the Top End. Brings back some memories as I grew up there :)

The first for the small focus and implied movement, also you know that it is looking for the scrap of meat and about to swoop! And the fourth for the majestic beauty a raptor has whilst gliding around. I would have liked to see a little more sharpness on the second and third photos though.

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Postby camrak on Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:28 pm

Many thanks Brett for this information - yes, these photos were taken on the Adelaide River. Anyway, you must love crocodiles if you grew up there ;)
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Postby Willy wombat on Wed Jun 20, 2007 11:13 pm

Very nice - like those before me i am a big fan of the first. Print it and hang it up!
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Postby bwhinnen on Thu Jun 21, 2007 10:38 am

camrak wrote:Many thanks Brett for this information - yes, these photos were taken on the Adelaide River. Anyway, you must love crocodiles if you grew up there ;)


Snapping Handbags are what we called them :)

I don't quite agree with the whole Jumping Crocodiles thing, means you can't really fish on the Adelaide River anywhere near that area without wondering when you might lose a hand from an over zealous croc :)
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Postby camrak on Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:43 am

bwhinnen wrote:I don't quite agree with the whole Jumping Crocodiles thing, means you can't really fish on the Adelaide River anywhere near that area without wondering when you might lose a hand from an over zealous croc :)


I totally agree with you on this point, because I also love fishing and there this activity can be too risky sport. These crocks are now more unpredictable.
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