Small gathering tonight, trying my hand at effective use of empty space. Hope these worked...
C&C welcomed
Cheers
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Giving the mk2n a workout!
Ok not really...
Small gathering tonight, trying my hand at effective use of empty space. Hope these worked...
C&C welcomed Cheers
None of the spaces really work for me. I'd give number 2 a closer crop though.
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Re: Giving the mk2n a workout!
f***CKING AWESOME!!!!! NOTCHBACK PANDA TRUENO!!! i love it if you can't telll! the shot really suits the style of the car and the b&w is awesome. edit: i'm still creaming. Last edited by jamesw on Thu Jun 28, 2007 11:44 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I really like the first two, I find the space adds to the image of the car without taking focus away. Last could be a tad too empty, it seems to make the subject the carpark not the car.
1. If the angled girder were framing the lines of the cars profile rather than intersecting it I would like this better, other than that I like the angle it is shot from, the conversion and the exposure levels
2. I'd simply like to have a gap between the top of the windscreen and the bottom of the support beam, as they are both darkish they blend a little. Same as above other than that. Even the location of the pole on the front works as the line is at the edge of the tyre, but there is a separation. 3. There needs to be something lighting from the A-pillar to the edge of the front door. Other than that I actually like the symmetry of the lines leading to the front and rear tyres, the poles, and the one way sign pointing in the opposite direction! Perhaps if you cropped it down to the second horizontal girder back from the far wall... Cheers Brett
Nice work matey.......love number three personally....
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