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 by Wocka on Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:14 am
Gidday,
This is the first panorama I've created from my recent (March 07) trip to the UK.
This is the Pulteney Bridge in Bath, a total 14 shots hand held (Kit Lens @ 18mm).
There is still some work to do on the other side of the river (I had to remove a lot of ghosting with the people walking), I also did a double process in RAW to expose the sky, then mask that in before the stitching in Panorama Factory. Please give feedback / critisism good or bad. I need it.
I have cropped off part of the bottom of the image, there is a little bit more of the weir and the pile of wood in the water (about 200px). I'm not sure if it's needed or not. I do wish I hadn't chopped off the top of the light pole though.
Cheers Warwick
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by Swinners on Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:18 am
wow i have been to that bridge and you have captured that perfectly what a lovely part of the world
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by Alpha_7 on Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:18 am
Nice work Wocka, I was standing in the same spot or close to it a few weeks ago now, but didn't have the piece of mind to do a pano in that position, great idea! Impressive worth stitching them together.
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by radar on Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:30 am
Warwick,
great pano, it comes out really good. If you do have more for the bottom, I think that would be nice as well as I wanted to see more. I don't mind the cut-off lamp, not much missing anyway.
Cheers,
André
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by Wocka on Tue Jul 17, 2007 1:38 pm
Thanks for the comments guys.
Swinners:
When googling the name I found a dusk shot of the bridge, that was nice.
Craig:
I have the following still to stitch and process from Bath
The Circle - 21 shots
Bath Town from lookout over the city - 13 shots (pity I couldn't wait till sunset, but my 8 month old would wait 4 hours)
Royal Crescent - 17 shots
+ more pano's from my travels around the UK country side.
Radar:
I checked the RAW files and I chopped off the top of the light pole, damn. Shows that a good set-up will stop you missing these things. But when travelling it's hard to take all the gear.
I looked at the non cropped image, the extra 200px at the bottom is just more water and that bunch of tree's. Not too sure it there is a lot there. Maybe more rushing water would be nice.
This is still a work in progress, so I will probably add the water @ the bottom back in.
Warwick
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by Nigell on Tue Jul 17, 2007 2:00 pm
I like it. A night shot here with a long exposure would be awesome. Nice shot thanks for sharing it.
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by Geoff on Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:44 pm
Wocka - I like this a lot but feel you have cropped off too much at the bottom, I'd like to see more at this end. None the less, very impressive pano work mate.
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by Wocka on Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:44 am
Here is the full panorama with no crop. You can see the added 200px @ the bottom.
I might try the Lomo Action on this image, see how that turns out?
 Warwick
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