An early morning in Melbourne...

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An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Aussie Dave on Fri Jun 06, 2008 7:27 am

Finally got the chance to go for an early morning stroll yesterday and snapped a couple of keepers....

Thoughts/comments appreciated.

1 - Yarra River
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2 - Federation Square
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3 - Art Spire
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4 - Eureka Tower
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Glen on Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:07 am

Nice work Dave, Melbourne looks great in these photos
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Greg B on Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:16 am

Number 4 looks a bit washed out to me, but I really like 1-3. Number one in particular
has an excellent quality to the light, great stuff.
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby rcg on Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:28 am

great photos
love 1 & 2 - - > awesome colours =)
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby NeoN on Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:43 pm

In my opinion the first two ,are really exceptional photos of Melbourne.Beautifuly composed ,and executed ,Great !! :D

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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby surenj on Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:54 pm

1# is a cracker! Well done to capture the great light..
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Killakoala on Sun Jun 08, 2008 10:42 am

The first two are great. The first looks almost as if it is two halves of different images. Really cool..

The second one shows me how it is possible to make Fed Square look nice. :) You have succeeded in the nearly impossible :)
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Matt. K on Sun Jun 08, 2008 5:25 pm

All excellent but #2 really smacks. It has impact. Nice work!
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Aussie Dave on Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:49 am

Thanks for your comments everyone. I took a few of Fed Square from the other side and when I decided to move on, I almost didn't take any photos from this side (shown in image 2)....but I'm glad I did as they were easily the best of the bunch....

No. 1 (of the Yarra) was taken straight after. I must have been having a few good minutes :lol:
I can only take credit for taking the photo....not the wonderful lighting that was setup for me.
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:56 am

Nice pix indeed.

I am wondering about your avatar in relation to the gear you list in your sig.

Do you have a new lens?
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby Aussie Dave on Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:01 am

cricketfan wrote:Nice pix indeed.

I am wondering about your avatar in relation to the gear you list in your sig.

Do you have a new lens?


I wish I had a new lens.

I really want to get a Sigma 10-20, but at this point in time I have to keep making do with my trusty old 18-70 kit lens (which all four images above were taken with).
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Re: An early morning in Melbourne...

Postby ebarra8 on Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:52 pm

Dave great shots. Love pic 1 and 2 the most
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