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Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

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Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby Yi-P on Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:05 am

Two shots around the coast areas:
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby Glen on Tue Sep 23, 2008 3:50 pm

Yip that second is stunning! It looks to have a commercial value as well
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby norbs on Tue Sep 23, 2008 4:42 pm

YiP, #1 Im not a huge fan of purely because my brain doesn't cope well with tilted shots.

#2, I would have loved to have seen with the couple left or right of frame. Hard to know what side because they are both looking different directions. Terrific colours in both though.
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby chrisk on Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:42 pm

#2 is a winner mate. i love the angle and perspective.
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby Geoff on Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:53 pm

Yip - awesome work mate and great selective focus use on the 2nd shot.
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby barry on Wed Sep 24, 2008 1:22 pm

Nice shots Yip. Good to see you finally got a fine day.
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby Oneputt on Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:19 pm

I agree number two is super :D
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby Yi-P on Thu Sep 25, 2008 11:00 pm

Thanks a lot guys, I'm sure the couple would happy with these shots :D
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Re: Few portraits from the weekend - PART II

Postby shutterbug on Fri Sep 26, 2008 5:31 pm

no 2 is very nice, love the rich green colour :wink:
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