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by jdear on Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:46 pm
As some of you know, due to a post on here I landed myself a recent wedding over at Lake Wanaka (NZ) for Glen & Leila! This was my first destination wedding (wedding overseas) and also my first Wednesday wedding. I had too much fun hanging with the bridal party, seeing a bit of New Zealand and their wedding day was beautiful! We had some scary looking weather the day before, also due for their wedding day but the weather cleared and we got some great shots! It was the most colourful wedding Ive been too! Leila wanted to have colour everywhere which I LOVED! I flew out Sunday for an afternoon in Christchurch before flying down to Wanaka on Monday for the Wednesday wedding. I flew back Thursday and had a Friday + Saturday wedding (which was my twin sisters!) I only wish I had more time to see more of NZ... next time  Anyway Ive finally blogged a few photos from their... starring Kalindriel + Mr Darcy...     as usual there are more photos on my blog.
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by snappd on Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:21 pm
Jdear, these shots are amazing....I also went to your blog to check out the rest & found equally as amazing shots there! Love the colour.....especially in MrDarcy's hair......nice touch!
I bet the bride is absolutely blown away by these.......I certainly would be!
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by chrisk on Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:27 pm
#2...farrrrrr outtt...amazing. you;re a freak and i hate you.
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by Catcha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:04 pm
2nd shot is fantastic...........also like the 3rd shot as well. The umbrella give it a nice background color
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by gstark on Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:42 pm
Jonathan,
I love your use of space in the third of these.
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by the foto fanatic on Mon Oct 06, 2008 7:03 am
These are outstanding.
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by JordanP on Mon Oct 06, 2008 8:08 am
Well done freak 
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by wazonthehill2 on Mon Oct 06, 2008 10:32 am
That third shot is fantastic love the space and scenery used bloody marvellous! all are great, bet the wedding party will love the pics!
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by surenj on Mon Oct 06, 2008 12:28 pm
Outstanding shots! I love the third - Did you change the colour in the top half and pain with light the rest? Great colour combination and composition..
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by karenkwan on Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:38 pm
# 2 is lovely! It looks like one of those shots that would look STUNNING in a big big print and hung in the lounge room 
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by jdear on Mon Oct 06, 2008 2:36 pm
#3 was pretty much what the light was doing so I moved them into it! I burned in the shadows a bit to accentuate the light. Thankyou all for your kind comments  I finally have some more photos I can put up in my office / meeting clients room at home - its a bit bare since I moved into it!
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by Mr Darcy on Mon Oct 06, 2008 2:37 pm
all are great, bet the wedding party will love the pics!
This part of it does  I love the third - Did you change the colour in the top half and pain with light the rest? Great colour combination and composition.. Outstanding shots!
#3 is my favourite of the ones I have seen so far too. Though others have commented that it seems a bit anonymous. I wasn't there for this shot. I was quite sure Jonathon didn't want a wannabee amateur hanging around stealing his techniques, but I suspect this was just how it worked out. The light was very changeable, but fantastic. And yes, NZ could give Ireland a scare stealing its title of "Emerald Isle"
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by wendellt on Mon Oct 06, 2008 2:52 pm
this si beautiful work congratulations looks like a fairy tale wedding
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by jdear on Mon Oct 06, 2008 3:03 pm
#3 SOOC (straight out of camera + web sharpening)  and the final...  I just adjusted the whitebalance and basically ran it through an action (which saves me time = makes me $$) 
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by kalindriel on Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:36 pm
See!! Wedding Photography can be ART!!! 
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by Mr Darcy on Mon Oct 06, 2008 6:01 pm
kalindriel wrote:See!!
Wedding Photography can be ART!!!
Shhh! Don't let Gary hear you 
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by gstark on Mon Oct 06, 2008 8:00 pm
Mr Darcy wrote:kalindriel wrote:See!!
Wedding Photography can be ART!!!
Shhh! Don't let Gary hear you 
jdear wrote:(which saves me time = makes me $$)
Oh dear ... did somebody mention something about money????  gstark wrote:the business of photography
And not to be forgotten, I also believe I said something about "Posing, composition, use of light" as well as "somebody with whom I have a connection". I think within the context of this wedding, all three of these statements hold true, and thus we have a very satisfactory result. Does anything else matter in this instance? Respectfully, I would suggest not.
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by kalindriel on Mon Oct 06, 2008 10:11 pm
Oh, What a shame. That wasnt even a half page rant!! I had much more success baiting you last time Mr Stark.
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by gstark on Mon Oct 06, 2008 10:21 pm
kalindriel wrote:Oh, What a shame. That wasnt even a half page rant!! I had much more success baiting you last time Mr Stark.
*winks*
Such a commentary would have been off topic in this thread. If you care to resurrect the other thread, we can discuss reasons as to why Jonathan was a much better choice for you than the other mob, as well as whether his work is artistic. 
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by whitey on Mon Oct 06, 2008 10:55 pm
Shots 2 and 3 are amazing. Wow.
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