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Postby Bob G on Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:01 pm

Not something I do that often, but had an enjoyable few hours this afternoon with some delightful models.

Got so many I can't even choose a favourite. Might have to get a hold of Professional Portraits software and have a go at a few of them.

This one is pretty much out of camera - just a few minor tweaks in raw and CS4.

As I have limited experience in this field would welcome some critique from those experienced in this type of photography and processing.

Comments welcome from others also.

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Re: Emma

Postby chrisk on Sun Jun 21, 2009 9:43 pm

beautiful gaze and expression. lovely soft lighting.
definitely lose the sunnies though. i'd also consider a slightly tighter crop on the top and right of frame.
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Re: Emma

Postby gstark on Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:30 am

Bob,

I'd like to see this cropped square, with the top of the image being somewhere around her forehead.

I'd also like to see a nudge more sat in this; pump the skin colours a little.

And speaking of colours, the wb may not be quite right. I think this one is a little too cool. Give this a little bit of a nudge towards the warmer side of the fence.
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Re: Emma

Postby aim54x on Mon Jun 22, 2009 9:56 am

I have to agree with a tighter crop, and with gary about the cool colours....great work though, I'd be very happy to produce something this good...think it is time to go ask around for models and drag out the S5 Pro...I am almost finished my honours project so I will have a bit of time!
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Re: Emma

Postby Bob G on Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:02 am

gstark wrote:Bob,

I'd like to see this cropped square, with the top of the image being somewhere around her forehead.

I'd also like to see a nudge more sat in this; pump the skin colours a little.

And speaking of colours, the wb may not be quite right. I think this one is a little too cool. Give this a little bit of a nudge towards the warmer side of the fence.


Will do Gary. Might need a couple of days before I can get at it.
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Re: Emma

Postby Bob G on Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:27 pm

OK - I had a little more time today to process another one of yesterday's model shoot pics.

I have absorbed the good feedback and tried to encompass those suggestions in this pic.

Would appreciate feedback on this second attempt.

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Re: Emma

Postby chrisk on Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:30 pm

perfect mate.
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Re: Emma

Postby ozzieimages on Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:45 pm

I quite like the original Bob but this is STUNNING..

Keep em comming..

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Re: Emma

Postby aim54x on Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:51 pm

absolute stunner there Bob!!!
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Re: Emma

Postby fozzie on Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:42 pm

A very attractive young lady, and the re make shot gets the :up: from me.
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Re: Emma

Postby ewm3 on Fri Jun 26, 2009 1:42 pm

drop-dead gorgeous; and the model is beautiful too.
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