suzanneg wrote:I want macka to take mine![]()
That's OK - then I'll take Macka's!


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That's OK - then I'll take Macka's! ![]() ![]() TFF (Trevor)
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John - and a good effort at that too. The pose is quite different for a self portrait and I think that's what's so appealing to this image. What was your backgroud? Can you talk us through how you achieved this shot. Your B&W conversion seems a little out of the ordinary too, I like it - what was your postvprocessing on this image? Thanks for sharing. PS - I see this as the 'first appropriate' image - does this mean you choose May's ES? Geoff
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I think you'll find it's "Welsh". ![]() (Sorry, that was pathetic, even for me...) Simon
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Dear oh dear oh deary me...heheehe....funny none the less Simon ![]() Geoff
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![]() ![]() Leek, I like this portrait. Simple, effective, nice lighting. If I was nitpicking, it looks as though you are turning away from the camera slightly, where a straight profile might have been preferable...but I know how hard it is to get one's own head in frame let alone at a particular angle. Nicely done. Cheers,
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ROFL... very droll Simon... ![]() The background for my shot was a gyprock wall that's still to be painted... I was about 40cm from the camera and the wall was about 1.5m behind me... I took about 57 shots - most of them front on, but I liked this profile shot... It's very different to the shot I started out with - heavily cropped - I then used high contrast, desaturated and then played with highlights/shadows to bring out some detail... It looks like I need a good facial, but I can guarantee that my pores are not that dirty!!! ![]() Cheers, John
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Alright, I've had a go.
![]() I wanted to try something low key, as I've never tried it before. Lighting was a small lamp bounced off a white sheet of paper. Originally this image had a mid-grey background, and I've done an amatuer job of changing it to black. Would particularly appreciate suggestions as to how I can do this more effectively (my left shoulder and ear have very soft edges as a result of what I did.) Used the 50mm/f1.8. ![]() Adjusted levels, contrast, applied gaussian blur to skin and sharpened eye and lips. Cheers Last edited by macka on Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:44 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Cheers,
macka a.k.a. Kris
Macka - I think the way it is is fine. Excellent, in fact. If I was to "nitpick" (as you say above
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Hmm..yes, good point. What is now the space above my head used to be my head when the background was lighter, and after making it black I didn't reconsider the composition. Thanks ![]() Cheers,
macka a.k.a. Kris
Another beautiful shot. Creates mystery, which keeps the eye drawn to the photo, as you try to imagine what's in the dark part of the photo. Very dramatic effect.
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Just what do you think you're doing Dave?
Ah... the advantages of youth... You have so much less to play with - less fat, less blemishes... ![]() A very nice shot macka, but I prefer the other self-portrait that you did... A hint of detail on the dark side of your face would improve it - maybe a slightly reflective surface facing the lamp to slightly light up the other side of the face? Good work though - at least I'm not alone in publishing my mug... ![]() Cheers, John
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John, great self portrait, love the contrast and B&W. For me, I think I prefer it cropped into a square without the ear. You look very serious
![]() Macka, like the portrait but agee with Simon, even really the concept of seeing just where you chin would be (as it is covered by your hand) as there is so much space on top. Lighting is very effective
How can I resist such a challenge. I find this image a touch confronting (which is the idea), but have to say I had no problem with the whole SP concept. In fact I've a few other good ones I'll post elsewhere. Click the pic for a larger version where the grain in the image shows better. ![]() Edit: Guess I should say what I did too. I sat on the floor against a white wall in my hallway. On a stool in front of me at face height I sat the camera set to commander mode. On the floor I had my SB800 in slave mode and angled up at me. Then I took the pics (307 of them!) using the remote (which is behind my head) to fire the camera. For PP I used the Nik Color Efex B & W Dynamic Contrast filter for the B & W conversion then added a little noise in Photoshop. Last edited by stubbsy on Sun Apr 02, 2006 6:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Some really nice shots, Stubbsy nice work the SP, I like your take one it.
Macka - Great work with the lighting, simple yet so affective. John - I like it, but where is the Cigar ? I think the profile works well.
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Stubbsy, there's defiance in your eyes, like someone is ordering you to line up against the wall. Strong shot - I like it.
I've had a go as well. I used the timer, pressed the button, and got into my lounge chair. Lighting was a lamp and the on-board flash. I had to learn how to do everything in Photoshop for the first the time - dodging, burning, guassian blur, sharpening (alot was required ![]() ![]() Canon EOS 350D Tamron 18-200mm
Just what do you think you're doing Dave?
Suzanne. The problem is the & in the filename. Rename it so there is no & then make the same change here and it will work.
Is that good or bad Rel ![]() Chris Interesting use of DOF on yours. Peter
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Chris, interesting crop, great focus on the eyes on a self portrait
![]() Suzanne, nice even lighting and good sharp eyes, though the flash or lamp makes it look like you have white pupils. A moment in PS could change that. ![]()
OK, I'll bite..
Haven't really done much SP stuff except for the usual take photos of yourself in a reflection etc. ![]() This one turned out ok, just used my small halogen desk lamp in my face, maybe less than a foot away. Spot metered on my face, rest of the room was pretty much dark, hence the black background (was just sitting in my computer chair ![]() Does it work? ![]() Chris
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This image works really well. The eyes really do grab the attention. Peter
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Spartikus - I think this is great. As a thought, there's enough interest in your eyes to do an even narrower crop of just your eyes.
Chris - Nice. I like the crop and the background colour. I would sharpen your eye a little more. Mum - you've already heard my comments ![]() Stubbsy - In a word, wow. The eye contact, and the expression are brilliant. I really like the high contrast and grain effect as well. So dramatic! Cheers,
macka a.k.a. Kris
I might have another go at this yet but here is my first. Taken whilst 'hanging around' on the decompression line 6 metres down under at the HMAS Brisbane this morning.
![]() I would have liked a wider lens to try this but I had the 60 Micro on which doesn't give a lot of options. Image is uncropped with minor saturation and contrast adjustments. Steve
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Nice one Steve. Good to see you in your other office...
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Nice, never thought of doing a mirror image.
I did have a really good idea but time is just not an option at the moment so I put in a picture from a couple of weeks ago. I did make a thread for it as I did not (notice I did not type "didn't) know everyone was posting there portraits in here. ![]() 'What I Done' Shot infront of a white curtain with on flash to my left covered in baking paper to diffuse. Kitchen sink behind me at waist level with another flash inside it 3 stops above to blow out the curtain and give a stong rim. Also have a baking tray to my right covered in foil to act as a reflector. Last edited by Newidude on Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Although I gotta admitt, sometimes it makes for a good laugh ![]()
Your and your twin are freaking me out. It's quite bizarre, I like it, but it's freaky!
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Interesing concept and it shows off the asymmetry of the face fantastically well. Which image do you like better (and is it left or right side)? Peter
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I was tempted to title this picture "My Willy" - but i thought better of that.
Two different views of me [img]http://www.fototime.com/{ADC10145-2047-4014-ACDD-C4D78D8FE5E0}/picture.JPG[/img] Cheers Steve Steve (Nikon D200/D700)
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Well quite a few shots later and i still cant get the webpage to reflect properly.
Followered the trend with the b&w. deleted the red channel before turning to b&w really brought out the pores. Although they look better(worse for me) on the larger pic. 3 years to the four zero, so i cant complain. ![]() Simon
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I don't know, they both look funny. And the one on my left (that's your right, of course) is my left side. If I print it and fold it so that the middle part disappears the original shot should appear. Cheers Steffen.
sounds like the back of a mad comic, u sure a message won't appear? Simon
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edit: deleted as the image does not emerge at the small posted size, will try another image.
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Thought I'd try and take a pic to include into this interesting exercise.
This was taken with D70 & kit lens, held at arms length in front of the bedroom window: ![]() ...and I know the eyes are slightly out of focus (that was what I'd intended) ![]() Dave
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Well, I can't decide between two of the images I posted in my own thread before, so here are both of them
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Some very clever takes on SPs here.
Shane, I loved the black and white version of your photo when you originally posted it - not that the colour one is bad ![]() Aussie Dave, intended or not, I think it would look better with the eyes in focus rather than the nose, but an interesting portrait. Suzanne Canon EOS 350D Tamron 18-200mm
Just what do you think you're doing Dave?
Hi everyone, first post here from me. I'm Macka's better half (:lol:), I've been lurking here long enough through her account so I decided to register. Imagine my surprise when the name rooboy is gone (how many other weirdos could call themselves that on the internet?) So I run a quick search through the few hundred mesages in my inbox, and lo and behold, I registered last year and couldn't even remember it!
Anyway, on with the photo. I know that it's oversharpened, I was going for a slightly noisy look. ![]()
Welcome Rooboy and congrats on your first post. This is a good image too though I'm not sure you've acheived the noisy look you said you wanted. Still, it's a great SP.
Now, don't just sit back and let Macka take all the good photos in your neck of the woods - we're looking forward to plenty from you too. ![]() Simon
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Wow - great SP. Interesting seeing a SP from someone you know. It really shows a good, serious expression that you don't see so often in social situations. Welcome to rooboy
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Just what do you think you're doing Dave?
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