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Postby nodabs on Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:05 pm

Some photo's from the Box hill mill see if you recognise one ;)

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questions comments and critiques as always welcomed
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Postby DaveB on Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:13 pm

Nice work. Seems a somewhat familiar subject to me.....
The shot you were aiming for was taken from the landing just behind and above your position...

Not sure I'm keen on the whitebalance of the external ones though: it never looks like that in person. ;)

Hey! Is that my house in the distance?
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:19 pm

They work a treat, especially as a theme group.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:25 pm

Nice work, I love the two with the whole in the boards.... almost waiting for something to jump out of the shadows, scary stuff.
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Nov 16, 2005 5:34 pm

Brave sod wondering around Box Hill that late ;) Love the b&w treatment with the hole in the floor.
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Postby nodabs on Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:10 pm

Nice work. Seems a somewhat familiar subject to me.....
The shot you were aiming for was taken from the landing just behind and above your position...


hehe yea i only relised that when i got home i've taken a couple from that landing before but usually during the day, and when i got there and remembered your shot i couldn't resist. The outside was pretty similar actually it was after a really nice sunset and the sky was really warm but cloudy.

Brave sod wondering around Box Hill that late Wink


not alone lol we go topsiding with at least 2 people mostly incase you break yourself. mostly you have to be worried about the guy who's house that is ;)

anyway i'm in the process of building up a flash setup that will make these shoots alot easier and alow for alot more lighting effects so stay tuned
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