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some more trials

Postby nodabs on Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:02 pm

some shots from Sunday

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was my first outing with a flash unfortunatly havn't got even an off camera cable yet so this is on hot shoe fill but it's a start

C&C please
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Postby moggy on Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:08 pm

Nice pics, I think #1 is the pick, #2 & #3 are a bit dark round the subject and I think #4 needs a bit more sky directly above the rider. All are nice and sharp with good colours. :wink:

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Postby Killakoala on Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:21 pm

Great images. I really like them. It amazes me why people do these things on pushbikes. A wall?? A Fence??? What's wrong with riding them down the road??? :) :) ;)
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Postby avkomp on Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:42 pm

think the first one is my favourite.

would be telling the riders not to wear blue shirts though!!

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Postby nodabs on Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:18 pm

tell me about it i'm just glad it was too hot for his blue trackie dacks :? :roll:

Killakoala: anyone can ride em down the road and what happens if someone builts a wall on you favourite road or a tree falls across you path you gotta be able to get over it. also it makes bumper to bumper traffic fun :)

thanks guys for the comments can't wait to get some more lighting gear
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Postby sheepie on Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:45 pm

The colours and overall lighting in the first one work really well. If that was your first outing with the flash I can't wait to see what you do with it once you know how to use it!!! Well done :)
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Postby nodabs on Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:48 pm

cheers it is taking abit to get use to but it's coming along there 's abit more of a learning curve since it's an sb24 with the D70 so it's manual just using the histogram and watching for highlights
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Postby Glen on Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:06 pm

I like the shots a lot. The subject matter is so startling that it takes over the images, but I think they are great also. Like Killa, I am amazed people can ride like that. Great colours, did you use a polariser?
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:30 pm

Excellent pics but the subjects are mad :lol:
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Postby drifter on Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:31 pm

Nice shots . Painful to look at the second one though . One slip and its no kids for this bloke .
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Postby Marty on Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:42 pm

Hey Nodabs,
cool shots again.
The flash really improves the images compared to your last post.
And all those comments about why...well why not.
The things is, your shots make your sport look easy, but to get out on a bike and do any of those tricks is a different matter.
The third shot riding the fence is an awesome trick, maybe try an angle more from the front of the bike to emphasise what he is riding.
They are all good shots.
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Postby nodabs on Wed Nov 30, 2005 12:22 am

I like the shots a lot. The subject matter is so startling that it takes over the images, but I think they are great also. Like Killa, I am amazed people can ride like that. Great colours, did you use a polariser?


no polariser i have a little set of tweaks i use to make them look like velvia slide film.

Nice shots . Painful to look at the second one though . One slip and its no kids for this bloke .


hehe you are usually pretty right in that regard. the only way to really nard yourself is the front or rear wheel slipping unexpectadly, and you can generally feel when your loosing it and jump to the side.

The things is, your shots make your sport look easy, but to get out on a bike and do any of those tricks is a different matter.
The third shot riding the fence is an awesome trick, maybe try an angle more from the front of the bike to emphasise what he is riding.


hmm i see what you mean but after a while i don't look at anything in those photo's as particulary hard and i just try to make it look cool for anything hard i try to capture peak of the action etc. i'll try to put the action abit more into context.

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