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This one is a bit obscure
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Was a bit windy and too bringht for serious exposure time. (not quite as sharp as i had hoped in #1 and 2.)
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Steve (Nikon D200/D700)
My photography website http://wwphoto.redbubble.com/ My photo blog http://www.redbubble.com/people/wwphoto Please feel free to offer any constructive criticism on my works
G'day Willy.
I think that these photos are a good start, however the lighting seems to be what is letting you down. I think if you were there when there was less light, and it was warmer then the shots would be better. Also in the first image, The rock in the foreground needs something extra so try perhaps splashing some water on it to make it look a bit better, and maybe adding a fern leaf or two, or perhaps some gum leaves. Just something to grab the eye a bit. Regards, Owen.
The composition of the second image, I find myself ignoring the left hand side because on the right you have the waterfall and the rock in the foreground with a bit of a fern. Perhaps if you had panned to the right a bit then maybe you could have got more water in?
Cheers, Owen.
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