An idle holiday arvo (DU warning)

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An idle holiday arvo (DU warning)

Postby Steffen on Mon Dec 26, 2005 10:09 pm

Hi all,
this afternoon when my wife and kids went to the beach, I stayed back (not being a beach person at all) and eventually got bored, since there isn't much for me to do at my parents' place...

Consequently, I picked up the camera and explored the backyard. The most interesting thing I found was a feeding frenzy in the grevillea bush. Here are a couple of samples:
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Whichever sweets the rainbow lorikeets couldn't reach the bees were eager to dig out. Unfortunately, they were far to agile for my tracking skills, so the most presentable I've got is a butt shot:

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I liked the soft light this late afternoon, and the colours and low contrast it yielded.

Finally, for a dose of festive kitsch, an image my wife particulary adored when she came back home. With it go my wishes for a happy remainder of the holiday season and a merry cross-over into 2006:

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Cheers
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Postby big pix on Mon Dec 26, 2005 10:24 pm

I find the lack of DOF to be a bit of a distraction for me......... but others might like the images.......... nice PP.........
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Dec 26, 2005 10:36 pm

Glorious vibrant images steffen and critically sharp in most cases where they need to be.
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Postby mudder on Mon Dec 26, 2005 10:53 pm

The color seems so vibrant in the bird shots and so soft and subdued in the rose pic (although I'd be tempted to play with some levels or curves with the flower itself)... Sharp as in the focal spot/plane too...
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Postby Matt. K on Mon Dec 26, 2005 11:02 pm

The 2 bird shots are outstanding and have commercial value. Well done!
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Postby Steffen on Mon Dec 26, 2005 11:11 pm

mudder wrote:The color seems so vibrant in the bird shots and so soft and subdued in the rose pic


They were all taken within 10 minutes or so. The light was just great. The grevillea was still lit by the low sun, the rose was in the shade. I didn't do any levels or exposure changes, only cropping and standard sharpening. If you look closely, there are still a few hot areas in the rose petals (in the red channel of course).

I had tried similar shots earlier today, and they were horrible - unmanagable contrast.

mudder wrote:(although I'd be tempted to play with some levels or curves with the flower itself)


Tell me more, please. I'm a complete idiot when it comes to PP.

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Postby big pix on Tue Dec 27, 2005 12:49 am

Have a look at this site as it has some very good animal and bird pix's........ a good reference site..........

http://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/318432
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Postby glamy on Tue Dec 27, 2005 7:46 am

Steffen,
I love the colors on the bird shots, very nice and sharp too.
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