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by Gordon on Mon Jan 09, 2006 12:22 am
Caught this bee? at my parents place in a hollyhock the other day, it was intent in getting deep into the flower and consequently got covered in pollen
It wouldnt stay still for an instant so I was following it around trying to anticipate its next move in an effort to get it in focus, one hand holding the stem from blowing in the wind, with camera in the other hand.
105mm with a bit of a crop and resizing, slight colour boost and unsharp mask.
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by Gordon on Mon Jan 09, 2006 12:46 am
Another one from a different angle. The OOF bit of flower in the foreground bugs  me a bit, but I think the different perspective shows the body a bit better.
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by skippy on Mon Jan 09, 2006 1:25 am
Fantastically sharp! Love both of them! Can't have been easy catching it.
How far away were you to fill the frame this much? Maybe I need a macro lens...
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by Gordon on Mon Jan 09, 2006 1:42 am
skippy wrote:Fantastically sharp! Love both of them! Can't have been easy catching it. How far away were you to fill the frame this much? Maybe I need a macro lens...
Thanks  they are both cropped from the original, taken from maybe 30 or 40cm at a guess.
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by skippy on Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:18 am
So not resized at all then, just cropped? Still a respectable amount of the frame.
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by Gordon on Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:40 am
The 1st one posted (taken later) was cropped + resized down, the bug was about half the frame long originally, the 2nd one was all crop, it was about 1/4 the length of the frame.
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by Killakoala on Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:59 am
That's just extraordinary. What a great photo. Well spotted and shot Gordon.
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by Oneputt on Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:48 am
Super detail Gordon 
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by Big V on Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:58 am
Gordon, they are fantastic...love how much pollen has covered the bee..
How goes the astronomy?
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by stubbsy on Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:04 am
Gordon - while not the prettiest of photos this is a superb example of the wonderful detail you can get with a dedicated macro lens. I'm guessing that bee was having a fun time.
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by sirhc55 on Mon Jan 09, 2006 10:41 am
Gordon, why worry about OOF foreground when you have captured a superb subject in an excellent macro 
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by Gordon on Mon Jan 09, 2006 11:38 am
Big V wrote:Gordon, they are fantastic...love how much pollen has covered the bee.. How goes the astronomy?
good, although I just finished a 5 night observing run this morning with no new NEO discoveries... the last couple of months have been a bit of a discovery drought, but there has been a lot of cloud reducing observing time
More exciting is the prospect of testing out my new 30mm f/1.4 Sigma on the sky sometime very soon from home  Hopefully its waiting for me at the PO this arvo.
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by MATT on Mon Jan 09, 2006 12:12 pm
Hmm, that bee must realy like the pollen. These are great images.
Like them both. The bee is sparp in no.2 thats bit i love.
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by Alpha_7 on Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:15 pm
Gordon - Loved this two shots, great to see a bee throwing himself into his work and really enjoying it, to get that covered he must of been having fun! Great work in a trying situation... shooting and holding the flower still, and trying to predict a bee's movements is not an easy feat!
Anyways, you were well rewarded for your efforts, some great macro shots that are a little less conventional and also provide entertainment value!
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by avkomp on Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:43 pm
amazingly sharp
nice shots.
certainly wouldnt have picked the 105mm as having taken these.
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by Alex on Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:47 pm
Excellent shots. Very sharp and detailed.
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