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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Jan 30, 2006 12:56 pm

Thanks to Alex for organising the micromeet.

Here a few of mine.

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The rest are here

Learnt how to use the onboard flash in manual mode - most of the pics were using the onboard flash in manual.
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 30, 2006 1:19 pm

the third one works because of the blown exposure which make sit llok more glam, pose is good too added by the shallow depth of field

maybe as a suggestion for the wider shots consider the background as important as the model, i think the park scene dosn't complement her look, try a more contextual scene, something that relates to the model
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Feb 01, 2006 1:27 am

Thanks for the advice and comments Wendell. Definitely taken on board :D

I was toying around with setting the flash power manually and managed to get a decent setting that let me use fill flash without making it too obvious that I was using the flash. Not much I could do about the bkg as I didn't organise it, but will take it into consideration next time. I'm thinking of finding an old warehouse (where I won't get arrested :)) to try for next time.
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