Shots around Port Melbourne

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Shots around Port Melbourne

Postby pharmer on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:18 pm

3rd day of ownership of my D50, amazing (for me) how many RAW images you can shoot in that time (450 so far)

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Postby marcotrov on Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:41 pm

Nice images pharmer lovely colour saturation. That D50 is a great piece of kit. My pick is the last one :)
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Postby Raskill on Mon Jan 30, 2006 11:07 pm

Have to agree, I like the last one, might look good PP's in black and white, with a nice high contrast effect. Number one would have been better, but you cut the radar dome off the top.

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Postby mikephotog on Mon Jan 30, 2006 11:21 pm

Only 3 days? Well done on these !

Number one could probably benefit from a bit more "real estate" around it.

Love number 3
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Postby pharmer on Mon Jan 30, 2006 11:36 pm

Heres a greyscale one - with a bit of burn and dodge

Now cropped a bit too

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 30, 2006 11:41 pm

Excellent work with your new toy. I'd suggest you revisit the last one and crop the lowest 5 planks. I think the image will be the stronger for it since (for me) the large amount of existing foreground detracts form the wonderful leading lines that take you to the centre of this image.
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