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Postby Pa on Mon Feb 06, 2006 6:40 pm

THIS IS ANOTHER SHOT TAKEN THIS MORNING I DID A CROP AND ADDED CONTRAST. MY SON FOUND A FRAME FOR ME TO TRY.
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Postby big pix on Mon Feb 06, 2006 6:52 pm

great image........ much better presentation........... but your horizion is not straight, so I have put a small book under the right hand side of my computer......when viewing

try adding a touch of saturation......
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Feb 06, 2006 6:53 pm

Pa, I really like this shot, it could just be me (I'm sitting on a couch) but the horizion does little a little uneven. Other then that the exposure is lovely and the colours and reflections are beautiful!
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Postby sheepie on Mon Feb 06, 2006 8:32 pm

Now we're talking ;) The improvement gained in cropping can't be underestimated.
I don't know what they're on about with the horizon though - looks level to me. Mind you, I only had a couple of wines at the weekend too ;)
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Postby Pa on Mon Feb 06, 2006 8:53 pm

THANKS BIG PIX, CRAIG, IM AFRAID IM GOING TO HAVE TO AGREE WITH YOU ABOUT THE HORIZON,LEON MAYBE YOU DID HAVE A FEW TO MANY, DID YOU HAVE A GOOD TIME DOWN THERE.
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Postby sheepie on Mon Feb 06, 2006 8:56 pm

Pa wrote:THANKS BIG PIX, CRAIG, IM AFRAID IM GOING TO HAVE TO AGREE WITH YOU ABOUT THE HORIZON,LEON MAYBE YOU DID HAVE A FEW TO MANY, DID YOU HAVE A GOOD TIME DOWN THERE.
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Yip - but YOU'RE SHOUTING AND IT HURTS MY HEAD ;)

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Postby mudder on Mon Feb 06, 2006 9:05 pm

Strewth, that looks great with a magic reflection of stunning colors and great textures, print it and hang it... And yep, the horizon police will get ya on this one :wink:
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