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The Haunted Building

Postby owen on Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:35 pm

Hi Guys. I was at Kiandra at the snowy mountains and went into the old courthouse there because the door was open. Inside I found this photo opportunity:

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It was quite dark inside and we went through a door out to the back which looked to be the main room... while I was in there walking around, I heard two knocks and the back door started to creak open, and I'm not talking a little bit, it opened the whole way. I didn't stick around to see what was coming, but we were the only ones there.

Weird...
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:42 pm

Scary stuff, and a forbodeing photo.
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Postby Willy wombat on Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:45 pm

The black space at the top of the photo is a tad distracting, have you considered a crop? I wonder what is beyond that door? :shock:
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Postby owen on Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:52 pm

Haven't really considered doing much with the photo... mainly wanted to share my ghostly experience. :) Thanks for looking though guys :)
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Postby mudder on Thu Feb 09, 2006 8:51 pm

The image will bring back memories of your experience :lol: so it'll be a good one...

Hmmm, maybe spooky B&W, crop the top, some grain and vignette around the door???
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Postby Willigan on Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:10 pm

Nice photo Owen - you've captured the Blair Witch atmosphere pretty well
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Postby Manta on Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:27 pm

I like it but think it would have looked more sinister if shot from a much lower angle - even from floor level. To me, the high viewpoint shrinks the door visually, reminiscient of Alice in Wonderland..
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Postby Alex on Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:46 pm

Owen - I like this photo quite a lot!

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