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Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 2:42 pm**

another dam on taree golf course,review and critiques please.
pa.

Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 2:49 pm**

Beautiful Pa, the only thing that niggles me about this shot.. well there are two things.

The red tee marker, but its a golf course so thats ok, just looks out of place at first. But the bigger niggle is the forground plant on the far right.

Other then that I like the shot.

Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 2:59 pm**

nice spot... and not a bad capture.

regarding the photo i think a little bit more contrast and perhaps some further saturation... possibly try taking the shot again so that the tee off on the right hand side is a bit more prominent in the foreground? just my thoughts

cheers

Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 8:47 pm**

Like the framing and nice exposure/lighting, has plenty of sat for me... Hmmm, if you did get back there, I'd be tempted to either exclude the foreground blades of the plant from the frame, or make more of a foreground item out of them... Being bloody picky here though :lol:

as it does look great...

Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 8:58 pm**

I hope you're showing these to the committee there Pa, you may be able to sell a few

Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 9:05 pm**

Actually I was just looking at that image again, and thought why don't you contact the Golf Course, get a couple of guys standing ready to tee off etc, buggies and stuff at the tee setup to wait for the photo and sell it to them as a packaged deal with print etc...? Worth a thought? It does look a really nice aspect so if you went again etc... Never know...

Posted: **Fri Feb 10, 2006 9:10 pm**

It would definately work better if there were a few golfers getting their shots ready. Love the light. Everything about this screams promotional pic, IF there were a couple of guys there with their gear

Posted: **Sat Feb 11, 2006 3:23 am**

thanks craig,xerubus,andrew,and leon,will have a look at what you say.i did send a copy of this to a friend of mine who is on the commitee.
pa