BW and color versions of Altona pier

G'day all,
Was just playing with a couple of images from Altona Pier recently and wanted to see what you thought...
I think I should add more noise and grittiness to the BW and the color version needs something, but dunno what ...
Appreciate C&C... Give me your worst I can take it
EXIF for both is: 50mmF1.8@F13, ISO200, man exp 13 seconds, two shots merged in PSCS2 etc. BW was LAB lightness channel and played a little in LAB color in the coler version...
EDIT: forgot to add, co cropping etc..

Was just playing with a couple of images from Altona Pier recently and wanted to see what you thought...
I think I should add more noise and grittiness to the BW and the color version needs something, but dunno what ...

Appreciate C&C... Give me your worst I can take it

EXIF for both is: 50mmF1.8@F13, ISO200, man exp 13 seconds, two shots merged in PSCS2 etc. BW was LAB lightness channel and played a little in LAB color in the coler version...
EDIT: forgot to add, co cropping etc..

