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Postcards from home

Postby stubbsy on Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:01 pm

Four recent images from Newcastle, all with similar treatment. Comments appreciated.

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Postby phillipb on Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:05 pm

Hi Peter,
Is it just my eyesight or there's something funny about those trees in the first photo? Sort of like the clone tool gone mad. :shock:
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:10 pm

Phillip. Not your eyesight. It's an artefact of the treatement I used. First I applied a B & W infared effect then I faded the effect back to return some colour. Some green areas go all fuzzy in the process.
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Postby huynhie on Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:33 pm

Very good Peter,

I actually prefer your colour photo/treatment over the black and white one's that you do.
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:23 pm

Peter,
Sorry, I don't see the beautiful of your hometown from these photos.
I still prefer the old and full colour.
It looks similar to the colour of the skin of drowned human.
I know you can do better than these.
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Postby mudder on Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:31 pm

stubbsy wrote:Phillip. Not your eyesight. It's an artefact of the treatement I used. First I applied a B & W infared effect then I faded the effect back to return some colour. Some green areas go all fuzzy in the process.


Phew, when I first looked at I tried to focus my eyes :lol:

Out of these the first one grabs me with the lines created by the lights intersected by the colums, something about the lines they all make grabs me...
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Feb 22, 2006 10:10 pm

Birddog114 wrote:Peter,
Sorry, I don't see the beautiful of your hometown from these photos.
I still prefer the old and full colour.
It looks similar to the colour of the skin of drowned human.
I know you can do better than these.

Birdy the idea of these is to get a kinda 50's feel where they hand tinted black and white photos - so they'll lack the natural richness and be destaurated.

Andrew (huynhie) thanks - I prefer this colour effect to B & W too, but it seems to go over less well so I figure we're in the minority here

Andrew (Mudder) - Don't do it so hard or you'll go blind :D
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Postby huynhie on Thu Feb 23, 2006 7:39 am

Peter, have you tried the Nik cross processing filters?

I kind of like the effect from those guys.
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Postby Matt. K on Thu Feb 23, 2006 7:54 am

Peter
You have succeeded in getting that old 50's look. I also think #3 is an excellent image. The compositin is perfect.

Birdy :D :D :D :D You mean like chi's avatar?
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Feb 23, 2006 9:05 am

Peter - I can see where you are coming from but to my eye there is far too much saturation for 50’s look. I have slides from the 50’s and due to age the degradation affects saturation, especially with Agfa.

They do have a certain feel of the 40’s from home movie style cameras 8)
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Feb 23, 2006 11:13 am

Andrew - have played with the cross process effect but never got a result I've liked.

Matt - Interesting - #3 is the one I was least happy with since I wanted the composition to be better (more cliff face in the distance). I took about 10 shots here and this is the only one where I included the vista in the distance. Of course in PP I realised that was what made the shot. Some day I'll get skilled enought to realise this when I take the damn shot.

Chris - of course your'e right (as usual) about the saturation. Never seen a home movie from the 40's though.
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Postby wendellt on Thu Feb 23, 2006 11:18 am

the muterd colour treatment on the first is much more appealing and nostalgic than the original colour version, i think that building looks a bit corny and you have presented it in a more elegant manner with your treatment
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