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Postby owen on Mon Mar 06, 2006 6:42 pm

Hi Guys. Unsure which version I like better, the colour or the black and white.

I'd like to hear your opinion.

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Postby sheepie on Mon Mar 06, 2006 6:53 pm

Hey Owen :)

I know what you mean, they are both great pics in their own right :)

I think I'm tending towards the B&W one, which is unusual for me. It just seems to have a bit more depth about it.
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Postby owen on Mon Mar 06, 2006 7:04 pm

Hi Sheepie. Thanks for your comment, I am inclining towards the b&w version as well. discovered it purely by accident - I was playing around in lab mode and this was the lightness channel.

I passed this one up when I was processing my shots from a few weeks ago, I guess it doesn't hurt to go back through them once in a while.

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Postby avkomp on Mon Mar 06, 2006 7:19 pm

I may be in the minority but I prefer the colour one.

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Postby big pix on Mon Mar 06, 2006 7:35 pm

colour for me ....... but a bit earlier so there is more colour in the sky.......
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Postby christiand on Mon Mar 06, 2006 7:38 pm

Hi,

I like both photos.

I think these two photos each give a different message:

No: 1 vibrant, energetic, nice colours, the day is rising, things to happen ...

No: 2 suttle, nice tonal shades, softer story, more relaxed.

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Postby bloop on Mon Mar 06, 2006 7:41 pm

I like the coloured one, not enough contrast in the B/W for my liking.
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Postby vort on Mon Mar 06, 2006 7:48 pm

Colored vers. for sure! The tones of the sky are simply magnificent. What camera was used? Settings?
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Postby marcotrov on Mon Mar 06, 2006 8:10 pm

Beautiful shot Owen. IMO the colour suits this image better Owen as those pastel tones really enhance the image. Whereas black and white would be better suited to a more contrasty image.
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Postby owen on Mon Mar 06, 2006 8:39 pm

Thanks guys.

This was taken with the D70 featuring the tokina 12-24 at 12mm. The sky colours were enhanced when I did a levels adjustment, but saturation stayed as is.

I appreciate the comments regarding preference to colour or black and white... I still like black and white - I did try increasing the overall contrast but there were too many dark areas in it.

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Postby Nikon boy on Mon Mar 06, 2006 9:20 pm

Owen, both are great, but i have to go for the colour pic ,,,lovely
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Postby Big V on Mon Mar 06, 2006 10:07 pm

The colour version has got so much more going on it just grabs you..nice..
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Postby Manta on Mon Mar 06, 2006 10:27 pm

Tough call Owen. I can't pick between them. The test I use is "Would I want them hanging in my living room and would I enjoy looking at it every day?". Answer is "Yes" on both counts for both these shots. Excellent images, each a winner in its own way.
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Postby Geoff on Mon Mar 06, 2006 11:11 pm

Both are beautiful Owen, and you have been putting out some great work lately but my preference is the colour one :)

Well done my friend. Keep up the excellent 'work' :D
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Postby johnd on Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:14 am

Owen, a beautiful shot. I like the coloured version best. A suggestion, if I could be so bold: have you tried cropping off the bottom third of the (coloured) image. I did so by just scrolling the page down and IMHO it adds even more punch to the shot.
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:34 am

It's a tough choice, but if you held me at gunpoint, I'd have to choose the colour version. The colours in it are just a bit different and gives it a bit of oomph. The b&w, while it creates a nice atmosphere, the grass to the right get a bit lost.
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Postby Pa on Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:36 am

g/day owen i prefer the colour image and as john says, crop of the bottom of it .
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Postby dreams on Tue Mar 07, 2006 8:46 am

Nice pic, i prefer the coloured one too. i cant judge if its sunrise with the B&w, if ur first intetion is to shoot sunrise, thats imho :)
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Postby darb on Tue Mar 07, 2006 1:20 pm

lovce the colours, nice, up early i see !

i would have loved to see a shot also without the foreground reeds ... or even standing other side of bridge with bridge and sunrise colours on right of composition and a wide expanse to the left ... but may not have worked (cant see obviously)
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Postby mudder on Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:08 pm

Definately the color one for me out of these, but maybe if the contrast in the B&W one was increased a smidge I might be swayed...

The color one seems to scream nice soft, late light and the color and tone makes the shot for me...

I assume it's just me but the color one looks sharper for some reason??? :?
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Postby owen on Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:13 pm

Thanks for all the comments. It appears the black and white is falling out of favour :) However I still prefer it... just one of those things I guess.

The black and white was copied after sharpening so I am not sure about the sharpness.

darb: This was taken from the other side of the bridge, but at 18mm rather than 12mm.

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