
Location: Henley Beach, South Aus
the exif data still intact.
It was hot that day, i guess that reflect how a day ends hehe maybe not

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Shilouette- my first submission![]() Location: Henley Beach, South Aus the exif data still intact. It was hot that day, i guess that reflect how a day ends hehe maybe not ![]()
Welcome Dreams, nice silhouette. Only point I might make is straighten the horizon, no biggy but would make the image a little more complete. I would imagine you can do it easily with the software which came with your Canon
Actually Glen, I think the horizon is fairly straight. I tried scrolling the photo down and it lines up ok with the bottom of my screen. Could be an optical illusion from the sloping clouds. Bye the way, nice photo. __________
Phillip **Nikon D7000**
Philip, thanks you just taught me something, never thought of doing that before
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Nice Dreams. I'm a fan of silhouettes, and I've taken a few that are similar but in morning light. It remarkable the different in the sunrise to sunset light... I can confirm that the horizon looks level on my LCD too. My only negative I can draw is that the silhouette doesn't look that sharp, but its still affective.
Nice work, look forward to more shots.
Dreams,
Nice sillouette, colour of the sky looks very nice. You should also try the two jetties just a tad further up the coast, Semaphore and Largs, they also offer interesting subjects. I'll concur with Glen that the horizon is not quite level (1-2deg) on the LCD here. It slopes slightly from left to right. Although I'm in the Northern Hemisphere and who knows what that does to an Aussie laptop ![]() Still a pleasant image, look forward to seeing some more /M. - "There... I've said my bit !"
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seems straight on my lcd.
the subject seems not that sharp, but as already mentioned still works. I think a little more room around the person would have been a little better but still nice as is. welcome to the forums. Steve check out my image gallery @
http://photography.avkomp.com/gallery3
This works well as a sillohette, be tempted to lower the exposure a smidge in PP to avoid the hot spots in the sky, there's no detail you need to keep in the sillohette so might be worth a try to get even more color depth in that wonderful sky... Agree with positioning/framing the person a smidge more into the frame, seems a bit bunched up on the edge...
Nice post ![]() Aka Andrew
Nice work Dreams. Well captured.
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Mark ![]() http://www.trekaboutphotography.com He who dies with the most lenses wins...
Hi guys, thank you for you comment and inputs, appreciate them.
excuse the sharpness, its my lens ![]() ![]() the reason why tight cropping was, the jetty was crouded and i couldnt get the best angle. so this is how the jettycrowd back then ![]() -peter
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