G'day,
Don't know the first thing about this sort of style shot but just to offer another viewers thoughts/ramblings
The first one has great color and saturation, seems excellent exposure, foreground just seems really busy to me with all the close lit windows. My eye seems to go to the bridge pylon (which has lovely light) and there seems to be a fair bit of open space in the sky with no texture, great color but no texture, maybe a slight crop off the top? Also find the stairs in the BR corner distracting, maybe either fully in frame or not in it??? Hmmm, wonder about a crop with some off the top and cut-off the stairs in teh BR cnr...?
The second is an interesting example of new tech and old craft, like the way you've framed it with the old craft being over-powered by the new tech stuff...