More Sunrise in Melbourne (5 img) D.U.W.

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More Sunrise in Melbourne (5 img) D.U.W.

Postby Aussie Dave on Wed Mar 08, 2006 7:33 am

I finally got around to working on some more of my images from my early visit to the Yarra River.

C&C welcomed/appreciated.

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Postby huynhie on Wed Mar 08, 2006 7:43 am

Very nice Dave. The first one with the balloons is my favourite.
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Postby mudder on Wed Mar 08, 2006 8:09 am

Love the framing and ground subjects in #1, terrific color, be tempted to clone out the lone pole standing up on the bottom left though, seems to distract from the main sillohetted (almost) ground subject...

2 and 3 seem to suffer from that bright highlight where the sunlight is reflecting off the building, just seems to really grab my eye...

Not sure why, but #'s 4 and 5 for some reason my eye doesn't seem to settle on a subject :?

Pick of the bunch for me is the first one, that's a lovely image with great feel and mood...
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Mar 08, 2006 8:31 am

I like the balloons pic a lot. Has more of an atmosphere to it.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Mar 08, 2006 10:21 am

I have to agree with the general consenus. The first one is the pick! I'd say I'd even like a crop that removed the stadium below (for something different).

The other shots, honestly don't do much for me. They seem a little on the drab side.
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