Just a couple of images for your C&C. Sunday, sunrise at DY Beach


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Sunday's sunriseHi All!
Just a couple of images for your C&C. Sunday, sunrise at DY Beach ![]() ![]() Mikhail
Hasselblad 501CM, XPAN, Wista DX 4x5, Pentax 67, Nikon D70, FED-2
Mikhail
First shot doesn't grab me - a little too much foreground sand I think. While the second image suffers from the same problem I really like it. The tonal range of the water and sky is great and the way the cresting wave leads my eye to the distant headland is a testament to your compositional skills. Shot on your Hasselblad? Peter
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Mikhail
Like #2 the slight diagnal line of the beach and wave and the cool moody colours. Feel much more of the sand could be cropped out though. Craig Craig
Lifes journey is not to arrive at our grave in a well preserved body but, rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "Wow what a ride." D70s, D300, 70-300ED, 18-70 Kit Lens, Nikkor 105 Micro. Manfrotto 190Prob Ball head. SB800 x 2.
both shots suffer from too much foreground blankness.
The first shot is the better of the two here, but feel you need to crop all the sand from the shot and be left with a pano shot of the sunrise, which looks nice. I just scroll the page down so I see what works for me. Steve check out my image gallery @
http://photography.avkomp.com/gallery3
Thanks guys for your comments!
This is a big advantage of a square format - you can crop what you want and the way you want - landscape or portrait ![]() Technically, I had to go closer to the water but then I'd loose an advantage of higher point Peter, yes, I've shot them with Hassy, developed and scanned film myself Mikhail
Hasselblad 501CM, XPAN, Wista DX 4x5, Pentax 67, Nikon D70, FED-2
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