Sunday's sunrise

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Sunday's sunrise

Postby Hlop on Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:57 am

Hi All!

Just a couple of images for your C&C. Sunday, sunrise at DY Beach

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Postby stubbsy on Tue Mar 14, 2006 12:40 pm

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First shot doesn't grab me - a little too much foreground sand I think. While the second image suffers from the same problem I really like it. The tonal range of the water and sky is great and the way the cresting wave leads my eye to the distant headland is a testament to your compositional skills. Shot on your Hasselblad?
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Postby CraigVTR on Tue Mar 14, 2006 12:47 pm

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Like #2 the slight diagnal line of the beach and wave and the cool moody colours. Feel much more of the sand could be cropped out though.

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Postby avkomp on Tue Mar 14, 2006 1:16 pm

both shots suffer from too much foreground blankness.

The first shot is the better of the two here, but feel you need to crop all the sand from the shot and be left with a pano shot of the sunrise, which looks nice.

I just scroll the page down so I see what works for me.

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Postby Hlop on Tue Mar 14, 2006 2:53 pm

Thanks guys for your comments!

This is a big advantage of a square format - you can crop what you want and the way you want - landscape or portrait :)

Technically, I had to go closer to the water but then I'd loose an advantage of higher point

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