Portrait Help.. No not self Portrait

The kids had a medievil day at school, so it was a chance to take some more pics of them..
But my question, does she fill to much of the pic or would some other composition work better? ANy other tips to help?
It a little soft partly the pic and partly the jpg compression. It also seems washed out when viewing on web browser!!
MATT
But my question, does she fill to much of the pic or would some other composition work better? ANy other tips to help?
It a little soft partly the pic and partly the jpg compression. It also seems washed out when viewing on web browser!!

MATT